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- Could you please correct this Review? I would like to improve my written english (English should be in capital form, "my English writing" means a writing written in English )to pass the CAE exam.Ever since ("when"will be better)I was <s style="background-color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">a</s> ten years old <s style="background-color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">kid</s>. I always loved listening to music, especially on television, and my favourite channel was "MTV". Despite the fact that it does not exist anymore as a fee television station, it gave me <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">the</s> (a)opportunity to see (to see what? ), with a gap of one week between each one, It is<s style="background-color: rgb(230, 0, 0);"> he worst and</s> the best video I had ever <s style="background-color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">saw </s>seen, respectively " Obsesion" by " Aventura" and "Youth of the Nation" by "P.O.D.".(I didn't understand)0 votedNovember 16, 20190
- The person <s style="background-color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">my</s> I (my表示"我的",而respect在这里是个动词所以要用I)respect the mostWhen it comes to the person who is the most respect for me(我总感觉这个地方有点不通,可以用I respect the most).Several people come up (这里用spring up 会更高级一点,突然冒出、涌出的意思)in my mind.But YuMinhong,i(I记得大写) think,is the one(the one?the one什么?the one后面应该还要加东西的。你想表达的是俞敏洪是我最尊敬的人,其实换个意思不就是俞敏洪在我最尊敬的人里面排第一,But Yu Minhong[这里名字中间要控一格] ranks first among those people).Why?actually,(Actually大写) reasons are quite sample(sample 还是 simple?) and can be listed as follows Firstly , Yu Minhong,the founder of the new oriental education,is the famous and successful english(English要大写,像Math,English这边表示科目的专有名词有要大写!) teacher in China.(你可以把这两句合成一句显得句子好看一点 Yu Minhong is one of the famous and successful English teacher who founded ……)Secondly,how can I expect myself to foster interest in english if without his wncouragement.(这句话比较Chinglish了。并且一般写作像这种用1.2.3点来支撑自己的观点的最好不好只写一句话。He serves as a beacon to me in the path of studying English. That is to say ,my interest on English will not be fostered without his encouragement )Thirdly,it can not be denied(beyond doubt 会更加分) that he spend (he 后面的动词要用第三人称单词,所以spend后要加s)valuable ( 用precious恰当点,valuable的感觉就像是什么东西值钱,有价值)time to tell the method of studying english well for us.Above all,his course lay(lay是lie的过去式,你前面用了spend是现在式,时态最好统一,还有就是加s) a solid foundation for ("对我……"你整篇都用的for,有些地方要用to)me,and serve (serves)as a catalyst for studying abroad in the future.From what I have discussed above,I am convinced (我被说服/信服?去掉am)that YuMinhong is my respect the most.(这句话你可以自己翻译一下通不通,俞洪敏是我的最尊敬😂)我改得很细了,花了半个多小时,I am not a native speaker.只是一名英专生,并且我自己的作文也需要人帮忙改~能尽所能帮到你也挺好,考试加油~\(≧▽≦)/~0 votedNovember 15, 20191
- Aging Although China has made a great stride in the development of economy and technology ,it's an indisputable reality that China is entering an aging era demographically. January 1 2016 did not only summon the coming of a new year,but also a new policywhich says farewell to the family planning in China . The implement of the family planning means Chinese couples are allowed to have a second child, however, on the other hand,it also shows the increasing aging issue in Chinese society. An aging era related to a society with more people growing older while less people are given to birth, It has bought a spectrum of problems to our society and economy. Firstly,the number of left-behind elderly is increasing,which attributed to their children have to go out for finding a better job that can make enough money to support the basic life of their parents go to the children and themselves . Consequently,fewer care and family happiness the left behind elderly get in their originally solitary twilight years. Secondly,great pressure was post on the adults for they are in a dilemma in which their parents and children are in all great need both in money and life. Sandwiched between two generations,the middle age bear great pain and panic physically and spiritually. Thirdly,the rising life expectancy combined with the stingy pension and provisions for the older makes life especially hard for the elderly. To solve those problems,moral basic and practical ways rather than verbal praise should be taken into consideration. The infrastructures for the elderly should be more perfect by the government. Moreover,the newly rising industries should be encouraged to invest in rural area for which the middle-age can be capable of working in their hometown and keeping company with the elderly.November 14, 201920
- Creativity VS Tradition Recent debates on creativity or tradition in the course of a country's development rage over the society. Supporters hold the views that creativity will be a mainstream of the development,and its added fuel to build a moderately prosperous social in all aspects. While opponents argued that tradiction outweighs over creativity in wild range area, and tradition is the primary thing we need to adhere to. The compromising idea is that the progressive of creativity coupled with the adherence of tradition. To begin with, although creativity is the mainstream of future,it doesn't mean tradition will be fade into significance. Recently,the style of Gugong has sprung up and prevailed rapidly in our society ,which characterized by its classical style and featured by the exquisite patterns of Gugong. The classical style was added to some daily items that can be regarded not only as inheritance of essence of traditional cultural, but on unique creativity combined with the tradition. Secondly,the tradition serves as the foundation to many impeccable aspirations of creativity and play an active role in facilitating the production of creative products and novelty things. Thirdly,it's beyond controversy that's the tradition has its own predominance and value deserved studying and learning. In general, the tradition is the root of our ancient country with culture,and it's also a magic instruments of creativity leading to a great progress in our economy、technology、society and even the whole country, however,creativity is the fountain of making a stride on the development. Therefore,the proper way is "creativity in tradition, tradition with creativity," so that the newly-birth can enduce the test of the people and the baptism of the time.November 14, 201900
- 请你们检查我的课文作文。昨天我跟爸爸妈妈一起去了餐厅。在那儿我看到了一个漂亮也很可爱/既漂亮又可爱的姑娘和一个帅气的男人,他们在一起吃饭。女人女生<s style="background-color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">选择</s>点了蛋糕和咖啡。服务员给<s style="background-color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">他</s>她咖啡的时候,<s style="background-color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">她说它不热,所以我们会看了他的脾气,她吵架的很厉害</s>。女生因为端上来的咖啡是冷了的,就跟服务员吵了起来,/女生点的是热咖啡,而端上来的却是冷的,所以就和服务员吵了起来,女生吵架很厉害。男人男生很<s style="background-color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">惭愧</s>羞愧,他想这个姑娘不是这样的。这个姑娘和她想象中/了解的完全不一样。0 votedNovember 3, 20190
- Should we Raise the Retirement Age? Debate about the policy of raising the retirement age of the Chinese workers has been raging in China for the past few years. Supporters hold that the extended retirement age benefit both elder themselves and their descendants in living standards and family's harmony. However, opponents view it as one of the vicious elements which deprived of their limited lifetime in enjoy their family. As far as I concerned,it is do good to the society as well as the elders that raising the retirement age in a proper way, the reasons are as follows. To begin with, although fresh progress has been registered in economy, it's a indisputable fact that our society is stepping into the aging society which lacking of vitality. Despite the improvement of fertility rate,the raising of the retirement age probably can be also viewed as a useful medicine to restore the energy of our society. Secondly, there are studies suggest that the elder people in working are less likely suffering from stroke and cadiocerebrovascul disease compared to those who are not. Under the condition of working, they constantly keeping thinking and communicating with others which pose a mental exercise on them. Thirdly,the deficit in retirement pensions is effectively compensated by raising the retirement age. Because it's brings a decent retirement allowance to the individual and the sufficient secure social funds to the social security department. All in all , the policy of raising the retirement age is a national wide issue associated with the people in all walks of life whether it is take into practice or not. The government should be encouraged to efficiently tackle it and implement policies taking the development of the economy, the society and the whole country into consideration. The common people also should be supporters to our government and bulid the spirit of struggle so as to be make our country more thriving and prosperous.November 3, 201910

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