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    幸福是一辆公共汽车

    亨利·米勒在《北回归线》写了 ”我没有钱,没有资源,没有希望。我是世上最幸福的人。” 从我们的拜金的社会的角度来看,我们如何理解这句话呢?钱不能让人幸福,这是常识。但是当我们陷入困境中的时候,我们往往认为钱就是救命恩人,或者钱就是万能药。不过,钱不仅仅不会解放我们,相反,会误导我们到更大的陷阱。

    那么,米勒也写到了 希望的部分。我们如何理解他的绝望呢?我觉得他这样想,是因为只有我们没有希望,也没有欲望,事情才能顺其自然。我在城市经常要等公共汽车。有一天,我发现了我如果一直想 汽车怎么还没来啊,怎么这么慢啊,汽车就不会来。但是当我停止发愁,停止想汽车,汽车就来了。幸福是一样的。幸福是一辆非常大的公交车,坐得下世上所有的人,但是关键是我们不可以候此车,而得无欲望地让它慢慢地过来。

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    July 3, 2011
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    How do you think of the celebrities ? ( continued the last composition ) As a public figure, the most important job as well as the best part of healthy human nature is to provide help and service to the needed people. The meaning and happiness of life is not deternmined by receiving but by giving. The chanel in which we devoting love is also the way of spiritual surge we gain from serving others. So, let me end with one of my favorite quotes from Martin Luther King. He put it like this, "Not everybody can be famous. But everybody can be great, because greatness is determined by service. You don't have to have a college degree to serve. You don't have to make your subject and verb agree to serve. You don't have to know about Plato or Aristotle to serve. You don't have to know Einstein's theory of relativity to serve. You only need a heart full of grace and a soul generated by love." A true winner will dedicated to make this world better and improve the quality of life.
    February 12, 2011
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    How do you think of the celebrities? There are many celebrities in our society, to the porfessions of art , science, medicine, business. They always act as the center of focus and leader of new fashion. Some people admire and respect them for their famous reputation. They seem to be taken as the symbol of success in the heart of many people especially the teenagers. They imitate their hair and dressing style, even the tone and content of their speech. But how do you think of celebrities in your own opinion except the influence of blindly worship?I consider that we should hold the critical thinking attitude toward this issue, It's no doubt that celebrities have their own manners to become successor and be proud of for their outstanding merits that prior to others. We should admit that sometimes the celebrities are worthy for their high status in society because the hard work and restless endeavour they have made.For instance, the famous singer star must care about her feature all the time . She has to practice her voice everyday and buy different kinds of high quality cosmetics fo make up for the entertaiment of public. Not only they hareness their potencial to amuse the entertainment industry and make our life more colourful and interesting, but also live under the pressure of media and public opinion to pay the high price of privacy right. Basically speaking, most of the celebrites hind behind the marks and pretend to be good image to cater the public, What they are doing or talking before the media is more like a performance rather than a real expression. Some celebrity advertise the fake product which they didn"t even use nor undertand. Some celebrity propaganda the negetive effect of smoking but with himself an addictor. Some famous profile make compliment to each other without the basic professional ethics. Therefor, I consider that we should take the issue of celebrity more rational and objective. What they do after they take off the mask as a common person is more important than those great words they have promised before the public. ( to be continued)
    February 12, 2011
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    享受中文的声音

    这个星期我没有写作文<strike>了</strike>。 我在思考用什么办法学中文最有效。<strike>想想到夏天用如何办法来学中文。
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    我觉得学外语不能仅仅为了通过考试等级。<strike>为考试是不太愿意的。</strike>至少,我没有为了考上某所大学而学语言的<strike>首先,我没有坚持考上某处学校等的</strike>动机。
    今天我和一位说日语的西方人交谈。<strike>说了话。</strike>他告诉我,通过日语一级测试之前,他只学<strike>日语</strike>了一年左右的日语<strike>了</strike>。
    他的办法是听日文<strike>听做</strike>音乐<strike>的</strike>。对他来说日文挺好听。他没有为准备考试特别学习,<strike>经历过为准备考试的特别的学习</strike>。开始<strike>了</strike>学日语<strike>之</strike>一年后,他才听说有<strike>了</strike>日语考试的存在。可能那时<strike>说不定</strike>他才开始<strike>了</strike>增加词汇量,可<strike>在那时间,</strike>毫无疑问,他的日语水平当是已经非常高了。
    他的办法似乎很有趣。下一两个月我也要采取他的办法,就是重点享受中文的音乐<strike>声音</strike>。<strike>也许这样的办法看起来像哼好听的音乐。

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    听音乐,看电影都不错,可以培养兴趣,但要选择发音标准的哦
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    January 29, 2011
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    我的梦想part 2

    关于中文,我现在的梦想是<strike>比如说</strike>,如果我给一个中国人打电话他不会听出来<strike>我就不想他们知道</strike>我是外国人。我知道实现<strike>成绩</strike>这个梦想特别难。现在我的口音是美国人的口音,但是我认为如果我每天都练习我的发音,就五年或者十年以后<strike>真的</strike>听起来真的像中国人。

    李想


    Everyone   has   dream  ,  practice  more , you will  realize it , come  on !
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    January 29, 2011
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    疼你;means love you and really care about you in the inner heart. 顺你:means I am willing to do whatever you told me to do In my opinion, to be frankly, the two words seem too fake, and pretended, Many boyfriends and girfriends would treat their partner at the early process of their relationship as "疼你,顺你". But because that they lost themselves in the complication for the other, so the relationship may not last long time. I deem that we should be the one as what we really are. After all , love is attractive and appease ,not accommodate or preform , unless has some special purpose. So I don't think these are two sound words
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    January 29, 2011
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    Cold & Plan Several days passed ,but without a composition had been written ,because these days I cought cold . Perhaps I was too busy in these two weeks . I had to write many articles for work .To be frankly ,I don't like to write that style of article , just very plaint and serious to summerize the whole year achievements .which means the focus had to be put on the positive aspects to stimulate us work harder in the next year . So , when I finished most of my work and planed to enjoy a laisure evening , I found that I didn't fell well and caught a cold . I had already took some medisine . Two weeks later , the winter holiday will begin and the chinese spring festival will come . I have some plans to enjoy it even though I know I have a lot of work to do and time is precious .But , after one year 's effort and endeavor, I believe that we should send ourselves the bountiful gifts of wellness which make us relaxed and content to clear the negative energy and nourish our strength and spirit . .
    January 21, 2011
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    January 19, 2011
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    什么时候是尽头?

    在这个办公室,中国人刻意与我保持着特殊的距离。<strike>特别争取和我保持距离。</strike><strike>我</strike>这个学期,我发现学校也有秘密的规则禁止与外国人交往。我只能把这理解为他们的历史所带来的性格倾向。<strike>估计这是文化大革命遗留的习惯。</strike>如果不是由于我的错误造成的隔阂,那我要多体谅他们,<strike>我应该多体谅他们一点,</strike>不过这样的环境老是让我感觉很郁闷<strike>是我做的错</strike>。 如果一个人和我彼此信任并真心相待,<strike>给我她的信任</strike>,我还是会把她当做我的朋友,即使是在私下里。<strike>要偷偷和她做朋友</strike>。变态。 在他们眼里,我终究<strike>我真</strike>是个外人。

    Hi  !康纳,Don't   force  yourself  to  do  the  thing  you  don't  like  ,even   sometimes  you  shall  follow  the  customs  of  a  new  conutry .  This  is  a  big  big  world ,you  can try  different   experience  and decide the  style  you  like. 祝你生活开心哦
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    January 11, 2011
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    what style of life do you want ? what type of life do you want ? success , money or high status in society ? When I was a child ,I always told someone who visited to my home and asked my ideal that i would like to become a great man when I grew up ,such as the government minister or a famous star ,even the professor in a world top university .They often boasted me as a ideal child and also reminded me that only concentration can lead us to success. On the birthday of my 23 years old ,when I received the gifts and wished as usual ,I couldn't help to reflect on the past times which has mostly used to study at school to acquire the knowledge that will benefitial for us to hunt a job when we graduated.Yes ,in the terms of chinese success ,the purpose of education is directly to find a good job .Not to mention sentiment ,we have been taught to equiptted with courage and realism .We ofen confort ourselves that we will finally find peace and free life after retired .When we at our prime years of life ,we shall to chase on the battle of competition. Some people will become success for ability or for other reasons. In the tide of this standar of value ,I always fear that I would abandon the ideal as many people do who turn around to pursue the material comfort .As the old proverb in China thousands of years ago ,"you study hard for the beauty ,money and power."But do the facts are really like that ? I would not agree it .I consider that the style of life should be more slowly to enjoy the process ,more lyrical to sense the rhythm and cycle of life melody ,more passion to show the energy and integrity of human nature .No one grew old by the number of years ,they grow old by discarding ideals . Some call it fate ,some call it chance ,but we must make it clear that the satisfaction and happiness of life would not created by the outside circumstance , but in the control of ourselves ,in the choice of what style of life you would to choose ,what progress you would make for the better life of your children .
    January 10, 2011
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