Could you help me by correcting the text ? Hello,every one ! My name is Susan.Now I will introduce myself from two aspects : Undergraduate study experience and Postgraduate study plan. First,undergraduate study experience: During my college years, I served as a member of the class's literature and Art Committee and director of the publicity department, and I was responsible for planning many kinds of activities. Second, postgraduate study plan: In the first year of Postgraduate,my primary goal is to pass the legal professional qualification examination.Then, I will actively assist the teachers to complete the project, and read a large number of law books so as to publish several law papers in the core journals.In the second and third stages of postgraduate, I will use my spare time to conduct legal practice in order to accumulate practical experience. Meanwhile,I will complete the writing of my graduation thesis and prepare for my doctor study. My introduction is over. Thank you very much.

Could you help me by correcting the text ? Dear professors, my name is Susan.I come from Korea.I graduated from Seoul National University with the major of international economy and trade.In terms of learning,I have always been in the top10 of my grade,and i have won national inspirational scholarship twice,first class scholarship and enterprise scholarship four times,and the title of Merit student four times.I have successfully passed College English Text Band 6 and National Computer Rank Examination. In my sparetime,i like vocal music and once got the nineth grade certificate of vocal music.I am good at figure drawing and sports. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to have this interview.

Could you help me by correcting this sentence? Local specials , delicious as well as nutritive , are filling up varies of vegetables and meat .

Could you help me by correcting the text ? Putting in the center of the vivid cartoon, the hotpot has a delicious taste and nutrition upon filling up the sections of ideas and celebrates .The meaning of cartoon is that we are supposed to be enthusiastic in absorbing the varies of cultures in order that we can be a erudite man. Firstly, absorbing the varies of cultures is a great spirit of the world which signifies that we see more,we think more,we learn more.Furthermore,ignorance is the source of the emotional suffering. In the end,college student should know that no one can survive the intense competition under strict school requirement through the ignorance of culture. It is imperative for us to take many measures .For example,we should apeal to school to make strict rules to advocate undergraduates learning kinds of cultures.It is the right time that we increase awareness to a"A strong thirst for culture is the best policy".

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