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Hello,every one ! My name is Susan.Now I will introduce myself from two aspects : Undergraduate study experience and Postgraduate study plan.
First,undergraduate study experience:
During my college years, I served as a member of the class's literature and Art Committee and director of the publicity department, and I was responsible for planning many kinds of activities.
Second, postgraduate study plan:
In the first year of Postgraduate,my primary goal is to pass the legal professional qualification examination.Then, I will actively assist the teachers to complete the project, and read a large number of law books so as to publish several law papers in the core journals.In the second and third stages of postgraduate, I will use my spare time to conduct legal practice in order to accumulate practical experience. Meanwhile,I will complete the writing of my graduation thesis and prepare for my doctor study.
My introduction is over. Thank you very much.
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Could you help me by correcting the text?
Hello, everyone! My name is Susan. Now, I will introduce myself from and discuss two aspects of my life: my experience of undergraduate study experience and my postgraduate study plan.
First, my experience of undergraduate study experience:
During my college years, I served as a member of the class's literature and art committee, and as director of the publicity department, and I was responsible for planning many different kinds of activities.
Secondly, my postgraduate study plan:
In the my first year of postgraduate study,my primary goal is will be to pass the legal professional qualification examination.Then, I will actively assist the teachers to in completing a the project, and I will read a large number of law books, so as to publish several law papers in the core journals. In the second and third stages of my postgraduate degree, I will use my spare time to conduct legal practice, in order to accumulate practical experience. Meanwhile, I will complete the writing of my graduation post-graduate thesis and prepare for my doctoral study.
My introduction is over. Thank you very much.
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