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Putting in the center of the vivid cartoon, the hotpot has a delicious taste and nutrition upon filling up the sections of ideas and celebrates .The meaning of cartoon is that we are supposed to be enthusiastic in absorbing the varies of cultures in order that we can be a erudite man.
Firstly, absorbing the varies of cultures is a great spirit of the world which signifies that we see more,we think more,we learn more.Furthermore,ignorance is the source of the emotional suffering. In the end,college student should know that no one can survive the intense competition under strict school requirement through the ignorance of culture.
It is imperative for us to take many measures .For example,we should apeal to school to make strict rules to advocate undergraduates learning kinds of cultures.It is the right time that we increase awareness to a"A strong thirst for culture is the best policy".
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Could you help me by correcting the text ?
Placed at the center of the vivid cartoon, the focal point has a delicious taste and is very nutritious upon tending to many ideas and celebrations.The meaning of cartoon is that we are supposed to be enthusiastic while absorbing a variety of cultures in order to become erudite people.
Firstly, absorbing various cultures is a great spirit of the world which signifies that we see more,we think more and we learn more. Furthermore, ignorance is the source of emotional suffering. In the end, college students should know that no one can survive intense competitiveness under strict school requirements through cultural ignorance.
It is imperative for us to take appropriate measures. For example, we should appeal for school to make strict rules which advocate undergraduate-level learning of cultures. It is the right time for us to increase awareness because “a strong thirst for culture is the best policy".
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Chen, I like your ideas here. Your write-up is well formatted, filled with superb vocabulary. I struggled to understand the first sentence - about the “nutrition and ideas”. Perhaps the idea is metaphorical and has a deep meaning? If so, be careful and mindful of your wording in these areas. Well done and good luck!
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