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    Application

    Dear sir or madam,
    I’m Monica, a high school student from No.1 Middle School. I am longing for an opportunity to study in your esteemed university. Briefly, multicultural setting, cultivation model and academic atmosphere are the main reasons that I apply for the University of Hong Kong.

    Diversified culture. Relying on uniquely favorable natural and social conditions, HKU is distinguished for internationalization, as expressed in its matriculate, teaching staff and teaching content, which contributes to broadening our horizons and firing up our curiosity about the world.

    All-around education. HKU advocates "Sapientia Et Virtus" and then places a great deal of importance on promoting our all-round development, which is conducive to training us to be talents with characters of morality, wisdom, health and aesthetic feeling.

    Academic freedom. HKU encourages us to express views freely, to question and challenge the authority, which is helpful to stimulate our passion for exploration and creation and to cultivate our sense of originality.

    If I had the honour to be admitted, I want to major in social sciences, such as law, psychology and economics, etc. Not merely because I have had a particular fondness for social sciences since I was a girl, but also because I am pretty good at it. Einstein once said, interest is the best teacher. To me, both interest and self-ability are important guides for my decision.

    In the future, after graduating from HKU, I would like to go abroad for further study.

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    March 23, 2012
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    Application Dear sir or madam, I’m Monica, a high school student from No.1 Middle School. I am longing for an opportunity to study in your esteemed university. Briefly, multicultural setting, cultivation model and academic atmosphere are the main reasons that I apply for the University of Hong Kong. Diversified culture. Relying on uniquely favorable natural and social conditions, HKU is distinguished for internationalization, as expressed in its matriculate, teaching staff and teaching content, which contributes to broadening our horizons and firing up our curiosity about the world. All-around education. HKU advocates "Sapientia Et Virtus" and then places a great deal of importance on promoting our all-round development, which is conducive to training us to be talents with characters of morality, wisdom, health and aesthetic feeling. Academic freedom. HKU encourages us to express views freely, to question and challenge the authority, which is helpful to stimulate our passion for exploration and creation and to cultivate our sense of originality. If I had the honour to be admitted, I want to major in social sciences, such as law, psychology and economics, etc. Not merely because I have had a particular fondness for social sciences since I was a boy, but also because I am pretty good at it. Einstein once said, interest is the best teacher. To me, both interest and self-ability are important guides for my decision. In the future, after graduating from HKU, I would like to go abroad for further study.
    March 23, 2012
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    好吃的鸳鸯火锅

    昨天晚上我 们 三个人去火锅店。我们三个<strike>人</strike>都是日本人。
    我喜欢吃鸳鸯火锅,我觉得它非常好吃。
    火锅店的生意很好,有很多人。
    我们点<strike>菜</strike> 了羊肉、鱼、豆腐、鹌鹑蛋、生菜、木耳、豆芽、竹笋等等。



    意见:因为是小短文,所以得注意句子的承接,不然就不像一个整体了。
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    November 27, 2010
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    Hi , I am Dennis from Beijing , which is the world biggest parking, but there are many <strike>of very</strike> famous places, such as the Greate Wall, the Summer Place, the Forbidden City and the Temple of Heaven. If you come to Beijing, I am glad to guide you <strike>for plearsure time at here</strike>.

    I want to communicate with you in English. I like traveling, playing badminton, going skiing and running.

    得注意固定的搭配和动词形式变换哦。例如: want to do sth / like doing sth;big的最高级要双写g。
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    November 27, 2010
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    Chophouse There is a chophouse nearby our dormitory. It is operated by a family of three: Father Mother and a son. They are so kind and generous that their business is prospering. Sometimes the neighbours stand at the door and just watch in silent. It seems that they are puzzled about what happens in the chophouse everyday. There are so many students to have lunch in the dining hall. What's more, the dishes have not varied a whit since. Considering time and newness, we prefer to have meals in the chophouse. Their leading product is "rice crust ", which is a golden covering with fresh vegetables and shredded meat . Besides, they offer appetizers for free. Both good and cheap, so it's quite popular. Today, when I paid, maybe I touched the landlady's hand, she said with a smile, "Oh, girl, you should keep warm, your hand is so cold." She just put me in mind of my grandmother. I was moved. It was a homely feel. :)
    November 21, 2010
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    我找到了我喜欢的中文名字:白奎

    在意大利南边有很多人叫PASQUALE。你们 也 都知道我 <strike>也 </strike>叫PASQUALE。不过朋友和家里人主要叫我PASKUI, 所以我觉得 “白奎”这个名字很适合我呢!

    你们看一下,除了“Pasqui"的发音和“白奎”<strike>的 </strike>差不多以外,“白奎”的意思还不错,“奎”是一个星宿名<strike>的名字</strike>。 ( or   是一个星宿的名称)
    <strike>从这段时间 </strike>从今往后,你们可以叫我“白奎”。
     
    我<strike>想很谢谢</strike>非常感谢你们,因为你们的建议对我找到中文名字帮助很大。

    谢谢
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    November 20, 2010
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    在交通工具上座位(让座)

    华华刚才清了(问?)我 <strike>我告诉你们 </strike>是否马德里的交通工具比上海的好<strike>没有</strike>。
    我<strike>恐怕</strike>(觉得可能) <strike>比 </strike>(跟) 上海 <strike>不好也不坏</strike>(差不多)。 <strike>马德里的交通工具和上海的相同。</strike>
    <strike>我觉得 </strike>各大城市<font color="#0000ff">(似乎)</font>都一样。住在<strike>各</strike>大城市的人们<strike>都 </strike>(好像)从来不 <strike>认为</strike>(考虑身边的其他人)<strike> </strike><strike>在他们的旁边有别的人</strike>。在马德里、<strike>在</strike>伦敦、<strike>在</strike>罗马我很少<strike>次</strike>看到<strike>了</strike>年轻<strike>的</strike>人给老人让座。

    <strike>我 </strike>记得我小的时候,大概只有12岁吧,我坐公共汽车<strike>争取</strike>(去)学校。<strike>好像我只十二岁。
    </strike>
    <strike>我记得我看很 </strike>(这时) ,一个五十岁上下 <strike>年极大 </strike>的<strike>女人</strike>(大婶)上车了。
    <strike>可能他五十岁了,所以他对我非常年极大的。</strike>
    我马上站起来,<strike>了</strike>对她说:请太太,给你我的座位。 (太太,请您坐我的位子吧。)
    结果,<strike>他</strike>(她)很生气地回答我:“我不是老人,我还很年轻 <strike>把</strike>(呢)!”

    <font color="#000000">不好意思,给你改得面目全非了……并不是你写得不好,只是语序还要再注意一些。 此外,如果是女士,就得用“她”;是男士,用“他”;是小动物或其他事物,用“它”。仅供参考哦。</font>


    让座
    华华刚才问我,在让座方面,马德里是否比上海好。我觉得可能跟上海差不多。各大城市似乎都一样。住在大城市的人们好像从来不考虑身边的其他人。在马德里、伦敦、罗马,我很少看到年轻人给老人让座。

    记得我小的时候,大概只有12岁吧,我坐公共汽车去学校。这时,一个五十岁上下的大婶上车了。我马上站起来,对她说:“太太,请您坐我的位子吧。”结果,她很生气地回答我:“我不是老人,我还很年轻呢!”

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    November 19, 2010
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    Somewhere over the rainbow It was in the Britain's Got Talent that I heared this song. Lovely Connie Talbot was moving everyone. Especially, When she refered to it's her grandmother's favorite, and she always sang for her, I cried with happiness. The most simple, however, is the most touching. It has been used as a film song in many romantic movies, such as "You've got mail", "Pretty Woman" and so on. It seems that it usually occurres at or near the end of the movie, so as to present the happy ending. When the dream comes true, the music turns on, you can feel the light of love and hope. You may think just you dare to think and to act, it goes for yourself! "Somewhere over the rainbow skies are blue, and the dreams that you dare to dream really do come true…“ Even some dreams can not come true, we should still have dreams, which make our living more fully and more interseting.
    November 18, 2010
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    出差出差出差

    这两天我在办公室里忙疯了。我正准备下个星期出差。
    周二晚上离开马德里去加那利岛,第二天要开会。在那儿,有家不太大的公司<strike>可以</strike>想买我们的软件。虽然公司不太大,但是<strike>可能</strike>他们可能会付我们很多钱,所以这次出差很重要。
    周三晚上十点坐飞机<strike>到马德里</strike>离开加那利岛。我估计得夜里一点到家。四个小时后,我需要起床,因为要赶八点<strike>我</strike>去罗马的飞机<strike>会发车</strike>。
    在罗马有另一家意大利公司。这家公司很大,比西班牙<strike>我</strike>的那家公司大很多。他们现在正在找一个和我们一样的软件,所以我要给他们介绍我们的软件。我已经向我老板请了一天的假,所以周五我可以跟我<strike>的</strike>住在罗马的朋友玩一会儿。
    周六回家,星期天再离开。我需要跟规模很小的在西班牙客户<strike>需要</strike>开会。他们在马德里北面,从马德里出发要走<strike>有</strike>三百公里。因为到这个客户的城市没有飞机也没有火车,所以我跟同事坐汽车<strike>会</strike>去那儿。周二夜里回家。

    唉,无休止的出差!
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    November 18, 2010
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    <strike>真</strike>(非常)可爱的外甥

    我 的 姐姐有一个<em><strike>真 </strike></em>很 可爱的儿子。现在他六岁了,叫DAVIDE,我觉得在汉语里他的名字是“大卫”。
    今年,<em><strike>是 </strike></em>他 <em><strike><font color="#0000ff">的 </font></strike></em>第一次 <em><strike>他</strike></em><em><strike> </strike></em>上学。但是一年前,他已经能看得懂简单的意大利文章,所以他认为今年的课不太难。
    他和我都很喜欢数学。我妈妈今晚告诉 <em><strike>了 </strike></em>我他上个星期下课后,一见了她,就对她说 <em><strike>了</strike></em>:“外婆,我觉得数学又有趣又不 <em><strike>太 </strike></em>难”。
    我妈妈回答说 <em><strike>了</strike></em>:“非常好。数学很重要的。你的舅舅也很喜欢数学。不过我得提醒<em><strike>建议</strike></em>你,意大利语也很重要。”
    他马上说了:“外婆!我只说了我很喜欢数学。不要着急。<em><strike>当然 </strike></em>我也很擅长意大利语呢!”

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    November 17, 2010
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