Chophouse
There is a chophouse nearby our dormitory. It is operated by a family of three: Father Mother and a son. They are so kind and generous that their business is prospering. Sometimes the neighbours stand at the door and just watch in silent. It seems that they are puzzled about what happens in the chophouse everyday.
There are so many students to have lunch in the dining hall. What's more, the dishes have not varied a whit since. Considering time and newness, we prefer to have meals in the chophouse. Their leading product is "rice crust ", which is a golden covering with fresh vegetables and shredded meat . Besides, they offer appetizers for free. Both good and cheap, so it's quite popular.
Today, when I paid, maybe I touched the landlady's hand, she said with a smile, "Oh, girl, you should keep warm, your hand is so cold." She just put me in mind of my grandmother. I was moved. It was a homely feel. :)
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Chophouse
There is a chophouse nearThere are so many students who eat lunch in the dining hall. What's more, the meals served there have not changed at all. The dining hall is convenient and new, so we prefer to have meals in the chophouse. Their leading product is "rice crust ", which has a golden covering with fresh vegetables and shredded meat . In addition to that, they also offer appetizers for free which are both good and cheap, so it's quite popular.
Today, when I paid for my meal there, I might have I touched the landlady's hand because she said with a smile, "Oh, girl, you should keep warm, your hand is so cold." She reminded me of my grandmother. I was moved. It was a warm feeling.
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Chophouse
There is a chophouse nearThere are so many students
Today, when I paid, maybe I touched the landlady's hand; she said with a smile, "Oh, girl, you should keep warm, your hand is so cold." She just reminded me of my grandmother. I was moved. It was a homely feeling. :)
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