English practice #30

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Do you know what Google Home is? It was made by Google in 2017. It <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">pased</s> has been about 2 years since it was <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">sold</s> released. You may think that our life will not change even we have the Google Home, but it changed(1). If you want to listen to music, you don't have to use your hands. you just say "OK Google, play the music". And if you want to get up early tomorrow morning, you just say"OK Google, Set an alarm <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">at</s> for 5:00"

If you have the oppotunities opportunity to buy something for your birthday, please try the Google Home!

1) The tenses are mixed in this sentence.

"will not" = future

"changed" = past

Just a couple of small mistakes, good job!

Attend an alumni association

I went back to my home town at the end of year and attended an alumni association of schoolchild age(1).

It was fun to chat as frankly as when we were children. And I felt intensely we <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">glow</s> grew up (2). Some of them became leaders, entrepreneurs, owners.

I also felt there are many ways to live. I am a salaryman and felt that I want to start my own business.

1) I phrase that comes to mind for me would be "... attended my high school reunion". I'm not sure which is the best comparison for which school. Names for school also change depending on whether it is American, British, or other countries. The following would be the most common in the USA.

小学校　= elementary school

中学校 = middle school

高校 = high school

大学 = college

2) This sentence sounds a bit strange. Another way to say it might be, "Seeing everyone grown up gave me an intense feeling of ________."

"to glow" は「 back to my home town at the end of year and attended an alumni association of schoolchild age(1).

It was fun to chat as frankly as when we were children. And I felt intensely we glow grew up (2). Some of them became leaders, entrepreneurs, owners.

I also felt there are many ways to live. I am a salaryman and felt that I want to start my own business.

1) I phrase that comes to mind for me would be "... attended my high school reunion". I'm not sure which is the best comparison for which school. Names for school also change depending on whether it is American, British, or other countries. The following would be the most common in the USA.

小学校　= elementary school

中学校 = middle school

高校 = high school

大学 = college

2) This sentence sounds a bit strange. Another way to say it might be, "Seeing everyone grown up gave me an intense feeling of ________."

"to glow" は「映える」かな。I don't know the word for "to glow" yet, but I think that is it.

I think you may have meant 生える = to grow.

citrons

Diary of January 6, 2020: I was off work today. That's why I made yuzu pepper. Yuzu pepper is made with citron, salt and pepper. My friend taught me how to make it yesterday. There is a citron tree in the garden of my house(1). This year, a lot of big yuzu fruits grew. My family took a yuzu bath at the winter solstice. My wife made yuzu jam. My wife also used yuzu for New Year's dishes. My wife handed out yuzu to neighbors. However, there was still yuzu that could not be used up yet. When I was wondering what to do, my friend told me about Yuzu Pepper on FaceBook. There are still a lot of yuzu <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">in</s> on the tree. What should I do with them(2)?

1) This is okay, but sounds a bit off to me. It would be more natural to say "There is a citron tree in my house's garden."

2) "What should I do?" This is a very general statement. It is okay, but I would recommend being more specific.

There weren't many mistakes. Good job!

Like Dr. Anthony Molaro suggested, Toy Story could be good. Many of the Disney classic movies, Pixar movies, and DreamWorks movies are good. They are made for children so the English in them is less complicated. They are also good movies in general, so even adults can enjoy them.

My husband and I checked out in Brockenhotel at 10:30 in the morning.

My husband and I checked out in of Brockenhotel at 10:30 in the morning. It was very windy. The station was closed until <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">at</s> noon because of <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">a</s> heavy winds. So I had to stay in the café for two hours until the first train came <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">for 2 hours</s>. My husband took pictures of steam locomotives at the top of the mountain. If I walked outside. , I would almost fly due to <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">a</s> strong winds. We left <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">the</s> Mt. Broken by steam locomotives at 1pm. Next we went to the Bmuakuchen house to eat <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">a</s> fresh German cake. It was very tasty. After that we went to Goslar Christmas market for shopping. We ate <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 204);">mash room</s> mushroom pizza and a dish sand???. I <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">heard</s> listened to Christmas songs and saw a romantic illumination. I don’t want to go back Japan.