citrons
Diary of January 6, 2020: I was off work today. That's why I made yuzu pepper. Yuzu pepper is made with citron, salt and pepper. My friend taught me how to make it yesterday. There is a citron tree in the garden of my house. This year, a lot of big yuzu fruits grew. My family took a yuzu bath at the winter solstice. My wife made yuzu jam. My wife also used yuzu for New Year dishes. My wife handed out yuzu to neighbors. However, there was still yuzu that could not be used up yet. When I was wondering what to do, my friend told me about Yuzu Pepper on FaceBook. There are still a lot of yuzu in the tree. What should I do?
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citrons
Diary of January 6, 2020: I was off work today. That's why I made yuzu pepper. Yuzu pepper is made with citron, salt and pepper. My friend taught me how to make it yesterday. There is a citron tree in the garden of my house(1). This year, a lot of big yuzu fruits grew. My family took a yuzu bath at the winter solstice. My wife made yuzu jam. My wife also used yuzu for New Year's dishes. My wife handed out yuzu to neighbors. However, there was still yuzu that could not be used up yet. When I was wondering what to do, my friend told me about Yuzu Pepper on FaceBook. There are still a lot of yuzu in on the tree. What should I do with them(2)?
1) This is okay, but sounds a bit off to me. It would be more natural to say "There is a citron tree in my house's garden."
2) "What should I do?" This is a very general statement. It is okay, but I would recommend being more specific.
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