A film-The new king of comedy
I've seen a movie recently, called 'The new king of comedy' <s>which , </s>directed by Zhou Xingchi. It does have some good punch lines, but it is not <s>fun </s>entertaining enough overall. Ru Meng, the heroine of this film, finally <s>got</s> reached success.I appreciate her willpower of chasing her dreams, but <s>in</s> at some points she doesn't work hard enough, <s>like dancing or another skills</s>.like when she dances, or uses her other skills. Her father is just like "our fathers" who are always saying, 'You never listen to me!' <s>before</s>! But they still care about us. <s>Doctor MA </s><s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">(</s><s>the actor</s><s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">). </s>I found that Dr MA's acting<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> </s><s>his acting </s>was too exaggerate<s>d</s> so <s>that I couldn't accept it </s>I struggled to believe it because <s>that's not like our real life.</s> it isn't very realistic. Or maybe I don't know much about the profession.
This was really good, well done! there were a few mistakes on phrasing sentences the correct way but I understood it all very well - hope this helped