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Patty
Daily Exercise on 30, June, 2019 I had been woken up by the noise from my housemates before 7:00am this morning, because they moved to other rooms and spoke too loud, then I couldn’t sleep and started to feel headache. After that I was going to eat Taiwanese food, but the restaurant wasn’t open yet, so I changed my mind, I ate the beef noodle soup at food courts which wasn’t delicious, I’m very disappointed.

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Hi Patty, sounds like you have a had a bad day so far!
Couple of points below.

Daily Exercise on 30, June, 2019

I had been woken up by the noise from my housemates before 7:00am this morning (using the present perfect here suggests the noise is still going on. If not, it would be better to say I was woken up by the noise...) , because they moved (were moving) to other rooms and spoke (speaking) too loud, then I couldn’t sleep and started to feel (get a) headache. After that I was going (had planned) to eat Taiwanese food, but the restaurant wasn’t open yet, so I changed my mind, I ate the beef noodle soup at (the) food courts which wasn’t delicious, I’m very disappointed.

Hope the day gets better for you!
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Daily Exercise on 30, June, 2019

I had been woken up by the noise from my housemates before 7:00am this morning, because they moved to other rooms and spoke too loud, then I couldn’t sleep and started to get a headache. After that I was going to eat Taiwanese food, but the restaurant wasn’t open yet, so I changed my mind. I ate the beef noodle soup at the food courts which wasn’t delicious. I’m very disappointed.

This is almost a perfect paragraph! Well done. I just added two words that are highlighted and added some full stops instead of commas!

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