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Achievements and Accomplishments I've just completed my English course, I hope to travel a lot in the next years and polish up my English talking to foreigners. There are some places what I want to visit first, like Iceland and Maldives but whatever country seems interisting to visit for me, you get many knowledge traveling and knowing diferent cultures. Sooner I and my wife hope to get a baby, I hope to be a good father and teach good habits for him, this year I change many bad habits and it've been amazing, I hope keep waking up early, running and eating health foods. I hope acomplish some marathons: in August my first marathon in Florianópolis, next year I want to run the Up Hill Marathon, it's a Marathon in a big mountain and there are just some vacancys, there will be a lottery, some day I hope to acomplish a marathon in Patagônia, I love that place and I love trail run, it will be a fantastic experience. Running is a good way to pratice your determination and perseverance. Well to achieve this achivments and acomplishments I need more free time and I hope to have my own business, I have a good job but nowadays it's important for me quality of living and keep good habits.

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Achievements and Accomplishments

I've just completed my English course, I hope to travel a lot in the next years and polish up my English talking to foreigners. There are some places that I want to visit first, like Iceland and Maldives, but whatever country seems interesting to visit for me, you learn a lot of knowledge traveling and learning about different cultures. Sooner my wife and I hope to have a baby, I hope to be a good father and teach good habits for him. This year I've changed many bad habits and it've been amazing- I hope to keep waking up early, running and eating healthy foods. I hope to acomplish some marathons: in August my first marathon in Florianópolis, next year I want to run the Up Hill Marathon. It's a Marathon in a big mountain and there are only a few spaces. there will be a lottery, some day I hope to acomplish a marathon in Patagônia, I love that place and I love trail run, it will be a fantastic experience. Running is a good way to pratice your determination and perseverance, but to achieve these acomplishments I need more free time and I hope to have my own business. I have a good job but nowadays it's important for me to have a good quality of living and keep up my good habits.
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thank you so much katie, In "lottery" I'd like to talk about a raffle, there are just some spaces in that marathon and a lot of people want to participate, did you understand me?
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This is really good! I changed a few words here and there but over all it was understandable. I was a bit confused about the run in the mountains and the lottery but everything else was amazing, well done :)

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