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    Capítulo 11 Dante hablaba con Ari sobre por qué no le gusta los zapatos. En cada lugar que visitaban, se quitaba los zapatos. Ari le preguntó por qué lo hace, entonces Dante le dió una historia rara sobre que no es natural llevar los zapatos y que los japones no llevan los zapatos en los edificios. Luego, Dante inventó un juego que es el lanzamiento de jabalina, pero de los zapatos. Comenzaban a jugar en la calle, pero el papá de Dante se lo prohibió y tuvieron que ir al parque para jugar.
    June 29, 2019
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    Capítulo 10 Ari viajaba con la familia de Dante para mirar las estrellas. Ari clavó una mirada por el telescopio al universo y parecía como más que Ari hubiera imaginado ser posible.
    June 29, 2019
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    Capítulos 6 y 7 de Ari y Dante Dante visitaba la casa de Ari y conoció a sus padres. El papá de Ari sonreía, lo cual es raro por él. Dante les regresó un libro de arte mexicano a los padres de Ari. Luego, Ari y Dante fueron al cuarto de Ari. No hay mucho en el cuarto. Ellos se conversaban sobre el cuarto y entonces Dios. Parece que Dante tenga mucha plata y Ari sea pobre.
    June 26, 2019
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    Capítulo 5 de Ari y Dante Ari visitó la casa de Dante. Conoció al padre de Dante, señor Quintana. Él hablaba sobre Dante y como no le gusta el trabajo. Después, Ari y Dante fuimos al cuadro de Dante. Su cuadro era muy desordenado y tenía que limpiarlo. Mientras limpiar, Ari leía un libro de poemas. Después de Dante acabó de limpiar, leyó una poema a Ari. A Ari le gusta la voz de Dante. Entonces, Ari fue a casa.
    June 25, 2019
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  • Corrected

    Opinion essay (B2-C1)

    Note: Please, correct it according to B2-C1 level :)!

    The way a film is making made is obviously something to keep obviously in mind. The plot is believed to be the most important thing, but as far as I’m concerned there are other things which  that can make a film absolutely stunning. (Note the change from which to that; these two words indicate whether an adjective clause is essential or non-essential - not too important at your level as a lot of native speakers mix this up, but it is something to be aware of) 
    First of all, if a film wants to be successful, the acting of the cast cast's acting has to be magnificent. There is no point in paying attention to the plot if the actors and actresses aren’t capable of playing  acting well. In addition, the actor must be professional enough to transmit the feeling to the audience. If people don’t feel connected to the cast, they won’t understand the message of the film.
    Secondly, a great film must include amazing special effects by taking advantage of the development of the current technology nowadays, such as practical effects or digital effects. The first group features everything that the special effects supervisor can make without using a computer. On the contrary, the second group uses computer programs, which are perfectly prepared to accomplish fascinating techniques such as ‘morphing’ or computer-generated imagery (CGI). (the use of which in this sentence was perfect because it was after a comma, and was therefore non-essential)
    Finally, last but not least, (choose one of these, not both, because they mean the same thing) the soundtrack is another essential piece of the puzzle. Nevertheless, many people think that music or sound effects might be repetitive or annoying. I totally disagree with that because the soundtrack helps to tell the story, or sometimes the different kinds of music predict something which  that is going to happen later.
    In conclusion, not only the plot is is the plot the main factor to make a film unforgettable and unique, but also the soundtrack, the special effects, and the acting of the cast. They are equally important as well so that and allow the film can  to go down in History!
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    May 30, 2019
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    Capítulos 1 a 4 Leo el libro Aristóteles y Dante Descubren los Secretos del Universo y escribo un sumario sobre lo mientras lo leo. Por favor ayudame con correcciones. ¡Muchas gracias! En los capítulos 1 a 4, no pasaba mucho. Solo era la exposición sobre Ari y su historia. Para empezar, Ari hablaba con su madre. No recuerdo lo cual era sobre. Después Ari explicaba su historia de su familia. Tiene un hermano, y tiene un padre que peleaba en guerra. También Ari dijo que pelea en escuela a veces. Hablaba como su vida es misteriosa y rara porque él es un joven. Al final conoció a Dante, un chico que le enseñó a nadar. Después pasaba tiempo juntos en el verano mientras leyendo, discutiendo, y riendo.
    May 28, 2019
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  • Corrected

    A start

    I'm learning English, but normally I do it too passively. It's simply easier to read and listen than to write and speak (you could also say "It's simply easier reading and listening than writing and speaking), and that's why I am terrible to express expressing myself in English: I do not practice, I just try to absorb.
    I always think in  about starting to write something here, however  but when I open the italki, my text's ideas about what to write (you could say this in many ways depending on what exactly you are trying to say) run away from me.
    I knew that would happen again today, so I resolved (resolved isn't a heavily used word in my experience, so "decided" may be better) to write even without any idea in mind, because for me the beginning is always the greatest obstacle, and I need to overcome this.

    Another reason to practice too is because I mix up a lot English with German in my thoughts, as seconds languages, (I think you are trying to say "as do people who speak two languages") perhaps because I don't domain neither of these languages are in my domain. (English does not use double negatives, don't and neither wouldn't be used together) I hope you could help me with the corrections and feedback.

    Thanks in advance :)
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    May 28, 2019
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