Opinion essay (B2-C1)
Note: Please, correct it according to B2-C1 level :)!
The way a film is making is something to keep obviously in mind. The plot is believed to be the most important thing but as far as I’m concerned there are other things which can make a film absolutely stunning.
First of all, if a film wants to be successful, the acting of the cast has to be magnificent. There is no point in paying attention to the plot if the actors and actresses aren’t capable of playing well. In addition, the actor must be professional enough to transmit the feeling to the audience. If people don’t feel connected to the cast, they won’t understand the message of the film.
Secondly, a great film must include amazing special effects by taking advantage of the development of the technology nowadays, such as practical effects or digital effects. The first group features everything that the special effects supervisor can make without using a computer. On the contrary, the second group uses computer programs, which are perfectly prepared to accomplish fascinating techniques such as ‘morphing’ or computer-generated imagery (CGI).
Finally, last but not least, the soundtrack is another essential piece of the puzzle. Nevertheless, many people think that music or sound effects might be repetitive or annoying. I totally disagree with that because the soundtrack helps to tell the story, or sometimes the different kinds of music predict something which is going to happen later.
In conclusion, not only the plot is the main factor to make a film unforgettable and unique but the soundtrack, the special effects and the acting of the cast are equally important as well so that the film can go down in History!
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Opinion essay (B2-C1)
Note: Please, correct it according to B2-C1 level :)!The way a film is making made is obviously something to keep obviously in mind. The plot is believed to be the most important thing, but as far as I’m concerned there are other things which that can make a film absolutely stunning. (Note the change from which to that; these two words indicate whether an adjective clause is essential or non-essential - not too important at your level as a lot of native speakers mix this up, but it is something to be aware of)
First of all, if a film wants to be successful, the acting of the cast cast's acting has to be magnificent. There is no point in paying attention to the plot if the actors and actresses aren’t capable of playing acting well. In addition, the actor must be professional enough to transmit the feeling to the audience. If people don’t feel connected to the cast, they won’t understand the message of the film.
Secondly, a great film must include amazing special effects by taking advantage of the development of the current technology nowadays, such as practical effects or digital effects. The first group features everything that the special effects supervisor can make without using a computer. On the contrary, the second group uses computer programs, which are perfectly prepared to accomplish fascinating techniques such as ‘morphing’ or computer-generated imagery (CGI). (the use of which in this sentence was perfect because it was after a comma, and was therefore non-essential)
Finally, last but not least, (choose one of these, not both, because they mean the same thing) the soundtrack is another essential piece of the puzzle. Nevertheless, many people think that music or sound effects might be repetitive or annoying. I totally disagree with that because the soundtrack helps to tell the story, or sometimes the different kinds of music predict something which that is going to happen later.
In conclusion, not only the plot is is the plot the main factor to make a film unforgettable and unique, but also the soundtrack, the special effects, and the acting of the cast. They are equally important as well so that and allow the film can to go down in History!
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