Good bye my love
Today I lost my lover.
We live in different city,so we had the feeling slowly fades.
I feel sad~~and I cry alone.
I treasure this emotion, but had to give up.
I don`t know what can I do ~~how can I do~??
I lost my love today (love better than lover - lover implies a physical relationship probably not
needed in a sensitive poem)
Different cities, fading passion (poetry better without full grammatical sentences)
Grief, blues, lonely tears (as above)
What an emotion, what a loss.
What now? Where's the horizon through these tears? (Finish strongly)
Liked it. Sounded from the heart. Sorry if so.