First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm a graduate student,i love english,but it's a misfortune that my english is so poor,i am thirst for speaking fluent spoken english,and my chinese is more better,i emceed the New Year's party of my class.i think i can teach you chinese well,so please making a friend with me ,and i think we will have a happy time.

I'm a graduate student. I love English, but unfortunately my English is poor. I am thirsty to speak fluent spoken English, but my Chinese is better. I MC'd my class's New Year's party. I think I can teach you Chinese well, so please make friends with me, and I think we will have a good time.