Good bye my love

Today I lost my lover.
We live in different city,so we had the feeling slowly fades.
I feel sad~~and I cry alone.
I treasure this emotion, but had to give up.
I don`t know what can I do ~~how can I do~??

I lost my love today                     (love better than lover - lover implies a physical relationship probably not
                                                                                  needed in a sensitive poem)
Different cities, fading passion (poetry better without full grammatical sentences)
Grief,  blues, lonely tears              (as above)
What an emotion, what a loss.
What now? Where's the horizon through these tears?            (Finish strongly)


Liked it. Sounded from the heart. Sorry if so.

Goodbye my love
 

Today I lost my love.

We live in different cities, and so we felt the feeling slowly fade.

I feel sad.. and I cry alone.

I treasured the feeling, but I had to give up.

I don`t know what I can do... how can I manage??