Respectively is not the right term. I think you are looking for: Numerically - by means of or with respect to numbers. Or In numerical order - to place numbers in a sequential order. Ex: 1,2,3 not 3,1,2, I would just say "in numerical order".

The acquisition

Have you done ever not  indecent  (I would use the word "bad" instead of indecent. Indecent is used for inappropriate clothing/actions that are usually sexual. The official definition may not expand on this, but culturally it carries this connotation.) things? Why have you done this? For example, I always try to be an honest and decent person. I consider such qualities are the acquisition for everyone I believe everyone should possess these qualities. You can't but agree  can disagree with me but if you don't feel nonchalant about it, then you need this qualities in yourself.

I will really appreciate if somone could give correction to my writing.

IELTS Writing Task 2

Some employers offer their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs,
believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers
see no benefit in doing so.
Consider the arguments from both aspects of this possible debate, and reach a conclusion!

Answer:

Many employers are always searching for various types of methods to develop employees’ productivity such as subsidizing the employees with healthy pursuits, believing that it might be one way to achieve it their goal (you are not incorrect here, but it sounds more educated with this wording). However, there exists an opposing argument against the first view this view that will be discussed here.

On the one hand, it’s commonly believed among employers that if the employees are avoided from being stressful avoid stress at work, they will possibly have more efficient ways of dealing with the tasks given. Furthermore, the life balance of the employees and their leisure time are more fulfilling. Paying increments or bonuses such as perks and incentives could also be a driving factor, which is difficult to attain. Finally, being healthier may lead to be more efficient work and even more creativity to completing the assignments instructed by the company.

On the other hand, the obstacle of the leisure-based subsidies lacks when it comes to measurability since its efficiency is impossible to assess. To illustrate, with the target related-payments, the employers can at least see the progress whether the employees can achieve it or not. It is also assumed that if the budget was allocated to pay (for instance) , the job training, or day release program, the employees would advance their career progression to a higher level than before (this is implied already). These matters are all easier to measure, especially in performance evaluation and appraisals. This option is even more motivating for the employees to push and maximize their potential to attain the reward after completing the target.

To sum it all up ("in conclusion" would be a better phrase), it seems that while health-related subsidies play a pivotal role, the lack of measurability is a substantial drawback. Spending budget on job training would appear to function effectively for the company.

NOTE: You did a good job!

Day 2 - 30 Day Creative Writing Challenge

Day 2
Think of three people in your life. Give your character the hair and laugh of person 1, the face and bedroom of person 2, and the wardrobe and mannerisms of person 3. This is your new protagonist. Feel free to give him or her any other characteristics you'd like. Give us an idea of who your character is by describing only the first 60 seconds of the character's day.

Here we go:
"Why it's is it always so hard to wake up in the morning? Especially when you're a night owl and work, think, and do everything better at night. Whatever, just one more normal day (a native speaker would say "ugh, it's just another day"). Man, the days are passing by so fast. When I was a child one hour seemed like forever, now I barely notice it.

I hate checking my phone up as soon as I wake up, screens really bother my eyes, especially in the morning. I should just wash my face and start the day. As I go to the restroom I feel the weight over my legs becoming harder to bear each day. Looking into the mirror I see this long black hair that doesn't seem to fit anymore. At least my laugh, which I'm known for, and my good mood are just the same. After brushing my teeth, with a smile on my face, I think of my short hair. Weird. I throw some water on my face, dry it up off and go back to my room.

It's a complete mess. God, I have organized everything and cleaned it up a couple of days ago. How can I make such a mess in a so short amount of time? Maybe the problem is my wardrobe. It has so many clothes that I never wear. Every time I have to pick something up, trying to combine pieces, I throw them over my bed, chair, or hang all the misfits on the door. on the doors all the 'misfits'. Just It looks like a hurricane.

And then, one more normal  another day begins..." (If they are speaking about work, another common phrase would be "another day, another dollar.")

I appreciate your corrections. =)

NOTE: You did really well, most of the corrections were plural that should have been singular or a misplaced article. Overall, great job!

Just to clarify "especially" is the correct way to spell it, but many people pronounce it "specially".

Referral latter

I am writing to refer in reference to Alison who is a year 5 student. She requires further assessment from your side to rule out her problems related to grief or  (OR meaning: one instead of the other, or do you mean AND which would refer to both grief AND psychological issues) psychological issues.

Regarding Alison’s social history, she lives with her mother and siblings. Her grandmother takes care of them whenever they are sick. Alison had a good relationship with her father. However, he was died 18 months ago and often times she often talks about him. As per school medical record, she was regularly absent after the death of her father.

Alison was performed well in school. Although, her concentration in class and participation in different activities noticeably declined since class 3. Alison has been exhibiting eczema on her hands and she is overweight for her age. Her medication was not helpful to did not relieve her eczema symptoms. She was teased by her classmates about her eczema and overweight both of these issues. She has visited the school clinic numerous of times due to different minor ailments such as headache, toothache, leg pain, and stomach ache. She was treated symptomatically and sent to home along with her grandmother.

Recently, Alison’s mother informed her teacher regarding that she was exhibiting withdrawal symptoms at home.

NOTE: Referral Letter

Buying on-line vs. traditional buying

Currently, everybody can buy anything on the internet. Thirty years ago, this system didn't exist and the traditional way to buy something was in physical stores. Nowadays, almost everyone has a credit card and they could use their credit card to purchase.

On the one hand, online shopping has certain advantages. To start with, online shopping It is usually more convenient than traditional shopping. Instead of waiting in a queue in a shop or wasting your time parking, you can make a purchase online from your home or anywhere, if you have an internet connection. It's a fact that Many shopping centers are crowded and the shops are untidy. Besides, you can find a lot of products on the website. For example, if you are looking for cars, you can take a look at all its features on a website. The price, color, years of warranty, technology, etc. However, if you visit the shop, normally you don't see a jacket in many shopping centers (do you mean: normally you don't see a jacket in many different colors?).

On the other hand, online shopping also has its disadvantages. A lot of people prefer to see, touch and feel the product. Nowadays, you can't smell perfume or cologne on the internet, Furthermore, neither can you try on clothes in changing rooms. In a traditional shop, you can choose what jacket you want and try it on in different sizes. So, you can know what jacket fits you.

Comprehensively In conclusion, there are some disadvantages and advantages. In my opinion, both of them can be helpful. Sometimes you need to buy something that you can't find in the store and you decide to look for the product on the internet. Whereas, sometimes you feel like going window-shopping (window shopping means going on foot) or go shopping physically  (repetitive).

During that time, I *became more nervous when I was in physical contact with him." Or, as conversational english: While we were physical, I became more nervous.

My classes do not allow cellphones or mobile devices. Teachers just say "put it away, or leave" and in some cases dock our grade or kick us out of class.