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in Mandarin: 谢谢
in Cantonese: 多谢

For me,
the best: Fernando Muslera, the goalkeeper of Uruguay, his excellent performance against penalty kick leaves me a deep impression<img src="http://www.italki.com/fckeditor/editor/images/smiley/msn/thumbs_up.gif" alt="" />
the worst: KEITA Kader, he should feel ashamed of his diving against KaKa in the match of Republic of Ghana vs Brazil.<img src="http://www.italki.com/fckeditor/editor/images/smiley/msn/thumbs_down.gif" alt="" />

Are you a spy? 你是不是间谍→你是间谍吗？

Ten people have admitted to being Russian spies in America. 十个人口供作俄国人的间谍。→十个俄罗斯人已承认曾在美国做间谍。 Shocking isn't it? 令人震惊对不对？International espionage in this day and age. 现在有间谍活动。→现在的间谍活动令人震惊吧？Isn't the cold-war over?冷战争不玩了吗→冷战不是结束了吗？ James Bond is supposed to be fiction relegated to the fiction. 詹姆斯→占士邦应该只是虚构小说。I bet this is only the tip of the iceberg. 我想这个只起点。→我敢打赌这只是冰山一角。 I think every country has their own "James Bonds" planted insidiously to influence public institutions to benefit their own country. 我想每一个国际有自己的詹姆斯在影响力政府对自己国际利。→我想每个国家都会暗中扶植他们自己的“占士邦”来影响社会公共机构，使自己国家获利。

一只陌生的浅驼色小水鸟在游泳呢

在我常常去观察的池塘上→里，一只陌生的浅驼色小水鸟在游泳呢。它是幼年的水鸟→它是一只年幼的水鸟，刚才从亲离开了→刚刚离开父母 / 从父母身边离开。最初→起初，我没看不懂种类→我没辨别出它的种类。不过我看到它的潜入水中样子时，我看得懂→我确定它是小鷿鷈。

I found a beige-colored, strange and small water bird→ a small strange beige-colored water bird swimming at→in the pond, where I always go and watch. It was a juvenile water bird, as soon as it became independent from the parents. At first, I couldn't identify the kind, but according to the way of diving into the water→the way that it dived into water, I was sure (that) it was a Little grebe.

*  the order of adjectives
1.determiner(a, his...)
2.observation(beautiful, expensive...)
3. physical description (size-big, shape-round, age- old, colour-red...)
4. origin (chinese,english...)
5.material (silver,silk...)
6. qualkifier (basketball,hat...)
+ Noun

I have no classes today. 我没有班今天。→ 我今天没课 （* "class" means "course", doesn't it?）

I have no classes on Wednesday. 星期三的时候我没有班。→我星期三没有课。 I am very free since I have a lot of time. 我很空闲因为我有很多时间。 I think I will go watch a movie since tickets are half priced on Wednesdays. 我想我应该→会出去看电影因为在星期六票是半价→星期三的电影票是半价的。 Which movie should I watch? 我应该看那个→哪部电影？
（* -wednesday=星期三, saturday=星期六.
       -那个=that (one), 那里=there,
       -哪个=which (one), 哪里=where.
       -should=应该, will=将会
       - one person=一个人, one movie=一部电影）

There is 有。。。

Knight and Day. “騎士出任務". Action movie with Tom Cruise and Cameron Diaz. 有动作的电影和汤姆克鲁斯和卡梅隆·迪亚兹→由汤姆克鲁斯和卡梅隆·迪亚兹主演的动作电影 / 动作片

Predators "铁血战士" . This will definitely be gory. Alien killing humans and vice versa. 这应该很残忍。 外星人杀人都人杀外星人→这部应该很血腥。外星人和人类互杀对方。（* here "will" = "应该/肯定", but it does not means "should", it means "大概"="probably"  but in a very certain degree）

She's Out of my league "美女爱宅男". Nice comedy but I rather watch an action movie when I go to the theater. 好的喜剧但是我多喜欢看有动作的电影再出剧场的时候。→（这是一部）不错的喜剧，但我宁愿去影院看动作片。

The Backup Plan "剩女也疯狂". Another nice comedy 都多一个好喜剧→另一部不错的喜剧 / 也是一部不错的喜剧 (it is also a nice comedy.)
（* -another=另一(……)物/人，e.g. another topic=另一个话题, another skirt=另一条裙子, another book=另一本书
       -“都”=both/all...are... , "也"=also, too）

The Karate Kid "龙威小子". I remember watching the original as a small kid myself. 我想起来看远处的"龙威小子"在我自己是孩子的时候。→我想起，小时候看过的原版的“龙威小子”

The Legend is Born - Ip Man "叶问前传". I watched Ip Man 2 just a few weeks ago...the movie makers sure have a fondness for Ip Man. 我看过叶文2才几周。。。做电影的人真喜欢叶文。→我两个星期之前才看过《叶问2》，那些电影制作人肯定很喜欢叶问

Toy Story 3 "玩具總動員3". I don't think I'll watch this. 我想我不会看一个→这一部。

So which movie do you think I should watch? 你想→你觉得/你认为 我应该看那个→哪部电影？

一只日本貂在山路上一溜烟穿过了→一只日本貂一溜烟地穿过了山间的公路

夜晚→晚上，一只日本貂在山路上一溜烟穿过了→一只日本貂一溜烟地穿过了山间的公路。它鼻子的顶端是黑色。→它鼻尖是黑色的，<strike>日本貂</strike>和黄鼬很像，不过它比黄鼬梢→稍大<strike>的</strike>。
而且→另外，我在石头上和突出的地点等经常看见鼬种类的粪。→我经常在石头等显眼的位置找到鼬类的粪便。

* ~“夜晚” is a noun and "晚上" is an adverb. It is better to use an adverb to modify the whole sentence.
  ~It is pretty vivid to use “一溜烟” to describe the marten's action. I appreciate it appearing in your account.
  ~梢=the thin part of a stripe-like thing, e.g. 树梢、眉梢、发梢.
    稍=a symbol of the comparative degree, e.g. 稍小=smaller
  ~when you use “而且”, the following content must be very close to the previous in logic and its degree is increasing. But  "另外" means you tend to shift to another topic or the other aspects of the same topic.

A Japanese marten went across the road of the mountain→a mountain road/path quickly at night. The point of nose→Its nose tip was black, so it was similar with→similar to a weasel, but the→its body was a little bigger than the weasel's one.
Anyway→Besides, I often find droppings→faeces of various kinds of weasels left at outstanding points→on some conspicuous places such as→for example, on the stones.

* ~If that passage in the mountain is used for car-driving or wide enough to drive cars, "a mountain road" is better. If it is used for people to walk, "a mountain path" is better.
  ~"nose tip" and "be similar to" are fixed collocations.
  ~"besides" is better than "anyway", for it means you shift to another topic or the other aspects of the same topic.