一只浅驼色陌生小水鸟游泳呢

在我常常去观察的池塘上，一只浅驼色陌生小水鸟正游泳呢。它是幼年的水鸟，刚离开父母。最初，我没看不出它的种类。不过当我看到它的潜入水中时，我看得懂才看出它是小鷿鷈。


不过我看到它的潜入水中样子时，我看得懂它是小鷿鷈。＝> 不过当它潜入水中时，我才看出它是小鷿鷈。

一只陌生的浅驼色的陌生小水鸟在游泳呢

在我常常去观察的池塘上，一只陌生的浅驼色的陌生小水鸟正在游泳呢。它是一只年幼幼年的水鸟，刚才从亲离开它的父母了。最初，我没看清楚它属于哪种类别不懂种类。不过当我看到它的潜入水中样子时，我马上意识到看得懂它是小鷿鷈。

一只浅驼色陌生小水鸟游泳呢

在我常常去观察的池塘上，一只浅驼色陌生小水鸟游泳呢。它是幼年的水鸟，刚才从亲离开了。最初，我没看不懂种类。不过我看到它的潜入水中样子时，我看得懂它是小鷿鷈。

I found a beige colored, strange and small water bird swimming at the pond, where I always go and watch. It was a juvenile water bird, as soon as it became independent from the parents. At first, I couldn't identify the kind, but according to the way of diving into the water, I was sure it a Little grebe.

这首本来我想改成小诗，可怎么改也写不出你的那种味道。所以就这样吧！

一只陌生的浅驼色小水鸟在游泳呢

在我常常去观察的池塘上→里，一只陌生的浅驼色小水鸟在游泳呢。它是幼年的水鸟→它是一只年幼的水鸟，刚才从亲离开了→刚刚离开父母 / 从父母身边离开。最初→起初，我没看不懂种类→我没辨别出它的种类。不过我看到它的潜入水中样子时，我看得懂→我确定它是小鷿鷈。

I found a beige-colored, strange and small water bird→ a small strange beige-colored water bird swimming at→in the pond, where I always go and watch. It was a juvenile water bird, as soon as it became independent from the parents. At first, I couldn't identify the kind, but according to the way of diving into the water→the way that it dived into water, I was sure (that) it was a Little grebe.

*  the order of adjectives
1.determiner(a, his...)
2.observation(beautiful, expensive...)
3. physical description (size-big, shape-round, age- old, colour-red...)
4. origin (chinese,english...)
5.material (silver,silk...)
6. qualkifier (basketball,hat...)
+ Noun

一只浅驼色陌生小水鸟游泳呢

在我常常去观察的池塘上，一只浅驼色陌生小水鸟游泳呢。它是幼年的水鸟，刚离开了父母。最初，我没看懂种类。不过当我看到它的潜入水中样子时，我看得懂它是小鷿鷈。

I found a beige colored, strange and small water bird swimming at the pond, where I always go and watch. It was a juvenile water bird, as soon as it became independent from the parents. At first, I couldn't identify the kind, but according to the way of diving into the water, I was sure it a Little grebe.