日本貂在山路上一溜烟穿过了
夜晚，一只日本貂在山路上一溜烟穿过了。它鼻子的顶端是黑色。日本貂和黄鼬很像，不过它比黄鼬梢大的。
而且，我在石头上和突出的地点等经常看见鼬种类的粪。
A Japanese marten went across the road of the mountain quickly at night. The point of nose was black, so it was similar with a weasel, but the body was a little bigger than the weasel's one.
Anyway, I often find droppings of kinds of weasels at outstanding points such as on the stones.
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日本貂在山路上一溜烟穿过了
夜晚，一只日本貂在山路上一溜烟穿过了。它鼻子的顶端（鼻子的顶端=鼻头）是黑色的。日本貂和黄鼬很像，不过它比黄鼬而且，我在石头上和突出的地点等经常看见鼬
A Japanese marten went across the road of the mountain quickly at night. The point of nose was black, so it was similar with a weasel, but the body was a little bigger than the weasel's one.
Anyway, I often find droppings of kinds of weasels at outstanding points such as on the stones.
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一只日本貂在山路上一溜烟穿过了→一只日本貂一溜烟地穿过了山间的公路
夜晚→晚上，一只日本貂在山路上一溜烟穿过了→一只日本貂一溜烟地穿过了山间的公路。它鼻子的顶端是黑色。→它鼻尖是黑色的，而且→另外，我在石头上和突出的地点等经常看见鼬种类的粪。→我经常在石头等显眼的位置找到鼬类的粪便。
* ~“夜晚” is a noun and "晚上" is an adverb. It is better to use an adverb to modify the whole sentence.
~It is pretty vivid to use “一溜烟” to describe the marten's action. I appreciate it appearing in your account.
~梢=the thin part of a stripe-like thing, e.g. 树梢、眉梢、发梢.
稍=a symbol of the comparative degree, e.g. 稍小=smaller
~when you use “而且”, the following content must be very close to the previous in logic and its degree is increasing. But "另外" means you tend to shift to another topic or the other aspects of the same topic.
A Japanese marten went across the road of the mountain→a mountain road/path quickly at night. The point of nose→Its nose tip was black, so it was similar with→similar to a weasel, but the→its body was a little bigger than the weasel's one.
Anyway→Besides, I often find droppings→faeces of various kinds of weasels left at outstanding points→on some conspicuous places such as→for example, on the stones.
* ~If that passage in the mountain is used for car-driving or wide enough to drive cars, "a mountain road" is better. If it is used for people to walk, "a mountain path" is better.
~"nose tip" and "be similar to" are fixed collocations.
~"besides" is better than "anyway", for it means you shift to another topic or the other aspects of the same topic.
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夜晚，一只日本貂在山路上一溜烟的穿了过去。一只日本貂一溜烟的穿过了山路。它鼻子的顶端是黑色的。日本貂和黄鼬很像，不过它比黄鼬稍大。
而且，我在石头上或突出的地方能经常看见鼬类的粪。
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日本貂在山路上一溜烟穿过了
日本貂一溜烟的功夫就穿过了山路
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貂过留痕，留下的是美丽的语句。谢谢您！
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