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- I received a weird envelope the other day.
When I went to the mailbox early in the early morning, there were was an unfamiliar envelope in my mailbox it.
There were no postal stamps or a sender’s name in on the envelope. The delivery address was my parents’ house and the name was my original family name, Yamamoto. I opened the envelope and read the message. It was written “Fat Bitch” was written [on the letter] inside it.
I have had no idea who sent me this the letter. I asked my younger sister about it. She told me that she brought the envelope in to my mailbox last night,. and that my father, who has suffered from brain a stroke, had an a horrible argument with his neighbors the other day. Because of that, the neighbors might have sent me *this envelope*.
His garden is overgrown with weeds. If my younger sister tries to weed the garden, my father always gets angry with her.
The postmark was from in Nagoya city. It was for the first time for me to receive such an abusive message. I was really shocked.
Great job!!
"this envelope." -> This phrase is correct, but we usually talk about the message or letter inside an envelope, not the envelope itself. Therefore, I suggest that you change this phrase to "the rude message" or something similar. If you have the energy, the whole essay could be modified to focus on the message/letter.
Your English is really great-- I had to look carefully to find your mistakes. One thing left to improve upon is sentence length; you can combine many of the sentences in the above text to be longer and more complex. This is not necessarily always a good thing, but we appreciate sentence variety in English.
Best of luck to you!
0 votedApril 20, 20191 - Yesterday, I went to an English conversation class. Usually, I go to the beginners class, but yesterday was I went to the normal class. All of the other students speak spoke English well. I want to know how do they think when they speak English. I take a long time to translate Japanese to English.
Great job!! I know the struggle of trying to think in your new language-- I end up speaking Arabic slowly and in a very English way, unfortunately. Best of luck to you :)
0 votedApril 20, 20191 - بناة "ستونهينج" من أصل الأناضول قرأت مقالة من بي بي سي اليوم عن دراسة حديثة عن "ستونهنج." أستخرج الباحثون الحمض النووي من بقايا إنسان من أسلاف بناة موقع الأثري عيشوا في بريطانيا في العصر الحجري الحديث. علم الباحثون من الحمض النووي أن الأشخاص الذين بنوا "ستونهينج" من أصل الأناضول، تركيا حالياً. عبروا البحر الأبيض المتوسط إلى أيبيريا قبل أن يعرجوا شمالاً.April 17, 201922
- I knew learned about this website when I was browsing browsed some the cChinese web, seeing where I saw some a poster introdused introducing this English learning English experience. So*, I opened the italki.com and registered at once to be a learner here. I hope I can make some progress here, and can help others with their Chinese learning. Good luck!!
* "After that" or "Because of the post" are better choices than "So" here. People may speak that way, but we don't use "so" on its own as a prepositional phrase.
Great first post and good luck to you too!
0 votedApril 15, 20190 - My language learning has changed a lot in the past few months. I think it has been happening because I can better read and understand the language now. It raises which has increased my motivation to keep practicing English. Another thing that motivates me to do this learn English is that I want to move into my own place. It seems to be something difficult to accomplish, but I know I can do this it and that I need this the experience. [Also, I really missed traveling this morning and I am planning to go overseas in a couple of months.]* In order to do this, I need to find a better job and start saving money.
*Options to make your idea clear here:
1. Also, I realized this morning how much I miss traveling, so I am planning to go overseas jn a couple of months.
2. Also, I really miss traveling, so I am planning to go overseas in a couple of months.
If you use "to miss" in the past tense it will imply you don't miss traveling any more, even jf you particularly missed it in the morning today. These options make your idea clear, it just depends on how much you want to include the fact you were thinking about future travels in the morning rather than at any other time.
Great job!
0 votedApril 7, 20191 - I read a book about how to write travel essays. The author recommends those who don't want to be tourists but to be travelers should write travel essays. In order to write essays, we have to observe things more deeply. By doing so, we will be different from other participants of a tour. I agree with him. I'll try to observe more deeply when I travel next time.
Great job! Just watch your spelling and work on making longer sentences.
0 votedApril 7, 20191 - Depending on the languages we know, we'll have some strengths or and weaknesses in learning another language. For instance, if we already know a Romance language, it will be easier to learn another one. Moreover, if we happen to know one with a richer phoneme base, French or Portuguese for instance, it will be easier to acquire the sounds of the other. Spanish, however, has a narrower phoneme base, which makes it difficult for Spanish speakers to correctly pronounce the sounds of French or Portuguese. As for the vocabulary, there are a few high frequency words that are quite unique to each Romance language, but the majority of words have a recognizable relationship among them. For instance, "avec" in French is unrelated to its synonyms "con" or "com" in Spanish/Italian and Portuguese. The bottom line is that a big portion of the vocabulary learning task is already done. Continuing with Spanish and Portuguese, we would probably understand a text, but we will not be able to pronounce it correctly. So the first task to be undertaken may be learning pronunciation and practicing writing. Other languages pose a harder task if they are not so related to ours. Some say German is related to English, but I don't feel there is any such relationship, or at least not so strong as to be of great help.
Amazing work! Your English is great-- I had to really search to make improvements.
0 votedApril 7, 20191 - Good evening 🌆 Today I want to talk about a piece of art that I made in the few past few hours. I worked on it yesterday and finished it in the morning. I used a colorful, glittery sticker cards which that enabled* me to create** all my ideas easily. It The piece represents the spring in with its lively, refreshing colors. I sticked stuck the cards to the paper after cutting them into different shapes to draw create the intended drawing picture. It looks like a young child made it, but I liked it too much a lot and my mother as well does too. I am going to make similar ones for my nieces because they were so excited when they saw it.
Better word choice:
*allowed
**illustrate
Rules to remember:
1. When you use multiple adjectives, put commas (,) in between them. For example: "lively, refreshing colors" and "colorful, glittery sticker cards".
2. "But" requires a comma (,) before it if the clauses are independent. For example, you could have written: "It looks like a young child made it. I like it a lot." Since these are complete sentences on their own, you need the comma before the "but." You do not need a comma for this sentence: "He went to the store but forgot his wallet." No comma is needed because "forgot his wallet" is not a complete sentence.
Great job with the art and the paragraph! Good luck with your studies.
0 votedApril 7, 20191 - My child is 5 years old but his awareness often frightens me. One day, I came in the home where I was met by my son. He had been waiting for me the whole day and right after my appearance <em>he</em> asked me "Why <em>is your</em> shirt dirty?" I couldn't answer right away and he continued<em>,</em> "You should <em>wash</em> it. We have a good <em>laundry</em> machine". He <em>uttered</em> each word clearly. Anyway, he is a really vigorous and smart kid. He never complains <em>or</em> worries anybody. All the information that I share with him he always perceives <em>attentively</em>. I think I should figure out about his possibilities for his future growth. Maybe we'll embark on something new.Great job! One last thing-- attentively is probably not the best word choice in your text. "Clearly" would be better but it changes thr meaning.0 votedApril 3, 20191
