My kid
My child is 5 years old but his awareness often frightens me. One day, I came in the home where I was met by my son. He had been waiting for me the whole day, and right after my appearance asked me "Why was my shirt dirty?" I couldn't answer right away and he continued "You should launder it. We have a good launder machine". He was uttering each word clearly.
Anyway, he is a really vigorous and smart kid. He never complains and worries anybody. All the information that I share with him he always perceives anttentively.
I think I should figure out about his possibilities for his future growth. Maybe, we'll embark on something new.
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My child is 5 years old but his awareness often frightens me. One day, I came in the home where I was met by my son. He had been waiting for me the whole day and right after my appearance he asked me "Why is your shirt dirty?" I couldn't answer right away and he continued, "You should wash it. We have a good laundry machine". He uttered each word clearly. Anyway, he is a really vigorous and smart kid. He never complains or worries anybody. All the information that I share with him he always perceives attentively. I think I should figure out about his possibilities for his future growth. Maybe we'll embark on something new.Great job! One last thing-- attentively is probably not the best word choice in your text. "Clearly" would be better but it changes thr meaning.
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My kid
My child is 5 years old but his awareness often frightens me. One day, I came home where I met my son. He had been waiting for me the whole day, and right after my appearance he asked me "Why was my shirt dirty?". I couldn't answer right away, and he continued "You should wash it. We have a good laundry machine". He was uttering each word clearly.Anyway, he is a really vigorous and smart kid. He never complains or worries anybody. When I share information with him he always perceives attentively.
I think I should figure out about his possibilities for his future growth. Maybe, we'll embark on something new.
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