A peice of Art
Good evening 🌆
Today I want to talk about a peice of art that I made in the few past hours. I worked on it yesterday and finished it in the morning. I used a colorful glittery sticker cards which enabled me to create all my ideas easily. It represents the spring in its lively refreshing colors.
I sticked the card after cutting them into different shapes to draw the intended drawing.
It looks like a young child made it but I liked it too much and my mother as well.
I am going to make similar ones for my neices because they were so excited when they saw it.
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Good evening 🌆 Today I want to talk about a piece of art that I made in the few past few hours. I worked on it yesterday and finished it in the morning. I used a colorful, glittery sticker cards which that enabled* me to create** all my ideas easily. It The piece represents the spring in with its lively, refreshing colors. I sticked stuck the cards to the paper after cutting them into different shapes to draw create the intended drawing picture. It looks like a young child made it, but I liked it too much a lot and my mother as well does too. I am going to make similar ones for my nieces because they were so excited when they saw it.
Better word choice:
*allowed
**illustrate
Rules to remember:
1. When you use multiple adjectives, put commas (,) in between them. For example: "lively, refreshing colors" and "colorful, glittery sticker cards".
2. "But" requires a comma (,) before it if the clauses are independent. For example, you could have written: "It looks like a young child made it. I like it a lot." Since these are complete sentences on their own, you need the comma before the "but." You do not need a comma for this sentence: "He went to the store but forgot his wallet." No comma is needed because "forgot his wallet" is not a complete sentence.
Great job with the art and the paragraph! Good luck with your studies.
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A peice of Art
Good evening 🌆Today I want to talk about a piece of art that I made in the few past hours. I worked on it yesterday and finished it in the this morning. I used a colorful glittery sticker cards which enabled me to create all my ideas easily. It represents the spring in its lively refreshing colors.
I sticked applied the cards after cutting them into different shapes, to draw create the intended drawing.
It looks like a young child made it but I liked it too very much and my mother does as well.
I am going to make similar ones for my nieces because they were so excited when they saw it.
Note: you could use the word "stuck" instead of "sticked". "Stuck" is the correct tense but sounds awkward to a native speaker because "stuck" commonly has another meaning - that one is blocked and cannot go forward. So I used the term "applied" instead, it reads better.
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Good evening 🌆 Today I want to talk about a peice of art that I made in the few past hours. I worked on it yesterday and finished it in the morning. I used a colorful glittery sticker cards which enabled me to create all my ideas easily. It represents the spring in its lively refreshing colors. I sticked the card after cutting them into different shapes to draw the intended drawing. It looks like a young child made it but I liked it too much and my mother as well. I am going to make similar ones for my neices because they were so excited when they saw it.
ماشاء الله يا ندى، عمل جميل وبداية جداً مشجعة، أعتقد أنه بإمكانك حياكة المزيد. ننتظر جديدك.
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Thank you :)
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I love this.
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