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Scott: OET IELTS PTE
English
Aug 14, 2020
A good essay Jara and I hope you found my feedback useful. I am looking forward to the next one.
Marlena
English
Nov 26, 2019
Jara, your use of “it’s” and “is” has improved, and I love to see your deliberate and conscious awareness of this fault AND with “people ARE”. In one class you were able to avoid these 2 pitfalls. Well done! Keep at it! P.S. Thank you for your feedback! :D
Marlena
English
Nov 7, 2019
It was great catching up with you and establishing a new plan for our future classes. I’m happy to work with you again, Jara! Things you could improve/remember: Some slips like: Final ‘s’ Ed vs ing adjectives To + verb, for + noun (sometimes ing verb) You correct yourself sometimes when it comes to your slips, which is great. Continue to do that.
Marlena
English
Oct 25, 2019
I’m so curious about your test and your final results, Jara! I have all the faith in the world that you will do a great job. You have a really nice command of the English language, especially when it comes to vocabulary and expressions. Your grammar is great overall, you speak slowly and carefully enough to formulate complex sentences. You’re aware of your weaknesses and you correct yourself, and your pronunciation is generally very clear. Whatever gaps you may lack in the aforementioned areas you shouldn’t even worry about because the positives outweigh the negatives. So have confidence, breathe, relax and go get’em! P.S. Thank you for all your feedback. It was a pleasure working with you.
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    Marina Pacheco is a person, just a person, based in the world. She has spent her whole life seeking answers without having any real questions, feeling too deep and too superficial, playing the artificial game of life, playing a song cover in lies, playing a role which she doesn’t even understand. And now here she is. Again. Starting something she will never end, because this is what’s all about for Jara, to start, to plan, to dream. Her past? Her past is blurry and fade, a daydream that has lasted thirty-eight years. Maybe this bio seems melancholic or depressing, but it is not. It is just honest, otherwise, it wouldn’t be her bio. Does really matter who she or anybody else is? Yes, of course, it matters, but keeping her identity behind a grey and dusty curtain makes it more interesting.
    February 20, 2021
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    Really? Are we still talking about this? We are in the XXI century, it is like we are in the future The year 2020 sounds like an old fashion futuristic movie. But here we are: in the future. Lots of things have changed during the last 20 years or so. The way we dress, communicate, commute, live, eat... And, obviously, the way we consume culture. Platforms as Netflix, Amazon Prime, or Mubi offer thousands of films every day. Now we just have to go to their website and choose what we feel like seeing. We listen to music on Spotify and Bandcamp, we read books in our e-readers. And, you know what? Nothing has happened. No artist is losing their jobs and no culture is dying. Unlike all the prophets of doom were prophetizing, culture has thrived. Independent musicians use the web to put their music and reach more people. Netflix has pushed the independent cinema and has produced small movies that had become a success, writers publish their books affordable for everybody. The debate about copyright is still outside there, but the terms have changed and no person is fearing anymore the new technologies. Now we talk more about share and give recognition to the artist. In my opinion, the ones who were afraid in early 2000 about the "end of the culture" were the same people who are just making art a business which gives lots of money to only few people. But this is just an opinion.
    May 27, 2020
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    What about the summer? Hi there! This is Jara, from the Canary Islands! So, yes I am in paradise, I am in these amazing tropical islands where I was born. I am in a place where the sun shines for 365 days per year... Meh... Someone give me my money back! I have been here since the lockdown started and we have had maybe 5 sunny days. So, that means that we have had more than 60 cloudy days. How that can be? Where's our loved star? Here the explanation: I live in the north of Tenerife, one of the greenest and most humid island. We have rain here almost every week, which is amazing. Thanks to the rain my valley (La Orotava) is crazy beautiful and stunning. However, during the last years, due to climate change and global warming, it rains less and less, the mountains are less and less green, the flowers and nature less and less gorgeous. For years we have been selling the Canary Islands as a sun paradise, the place to be inf you want to burn your skin and drink as much beer as you can for cheap. Nature has been destroyed by the craziness of a tourist industry which has one only thought in mind: make money, all the money, regardless of the environmental and social impact. But there is hope, and voices are being listened, people are developing another kind of tourism, and respectful and no-mass tourism is increasingly popular. Tourists and native people from the island are looking forward to preserving nature and wildlife. The firsts come here to enjoy the calm and the pure air, not to party anymore, and the local people are fed up with noise and nonrespectful visitors. So, what about the summer? The summer this year is going to be amazing, wet, and green. Love this daily rain and low temperatures, the birds are happy, the plants are happy, the earth is happy. I am happy! Have a nice Friday everybody!
    May 22, 2020
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    Certificado de empleo:

    La Universidad Politécnica de Moscú certifica que, Aslamova Tatyana Vladimirovna, nacida el 31 de Marzo de 1963, trabaja <s>efectivamente</s> en la Universidad Politécnica de Moscú, desempeñando el cargo de <s>la </s>profesora titular del Departamento de Idiomas Extranjeros, desde el 1 de Septiembre de 2017 hasta la fecha.

    El salario mensual promedio de la Sra. Aslamova durante el período comprendido entre el 1 de Diciembre de 2018 y el 28 de Febrero de 2019 fue de 106 367, 82 rublos (ciento seis mil trescientos sesenta y siete rublos, ochenta y dos kopeks).

    En el momento de la visita, la Sra. Aslamova <s>se </s>conservará su derecho al puesto de trabajo.

    Las actividades de la Universidad Politécnica de Moscú se realizan en el ámbito de la prestación de servicios educativos.

    <em>Hola Marina, he hecho algunas pequeñas correcciones que detallo a continuación: </em>
    <ul><li><em>Doy por hecho que esto es una notificación. Es importante tener en cuenta la estructura de este tipo de textos. En tu caso echo en falta simplemente el lugar y la fecha en la que se ha redactado el documento. </em></li><li><em>Ten cuidado con la puntuación. En tu nivel es importante puntuar correctamente. </em></li><li><em>El uso de la palabra "efectivamente" en este contexto puede llevar a confusión. Yo en tu lugar lo evitaría, ya que no queda claro si el trabajo de la Sra. Aslamova es efectivo, es decir, da buenos resultados, o es un hecho, es real. </em></li></ul>

    <em>Muchas felicidades por tu texto. Es correcto, claro y directo. Se ve que tienes un control muy alto del idioma. Si estás interesada en pulir tu español con clases privadas te invito a visitar mi perfil de profesora y a reservar una clase de prueba gratuita y sin ningún compromiso. </em>
    <em>Un cordial saludo, Jara </em>
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    November 2, 2019
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    ¿Prefieres vivir en una ciudad o en un pueblo?

    Prefiero vivir en una ciudad porque hay <s>mucho </s> muchas más actividades para hacer que en los pueblos. Me gusta mucho conocer <s>a las</s> personas diferentes (<em style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">Es preferible decir gente diferente</em>). He vivido en ciudades grandes durante toda mi vida y no puedo imaginarme como <s>un </s>residente <s>en </s> de un pueblo donde todo el mundo se conoce. Además, pienso que los servicios en las ciudades grandes son mejores. Debido <s>al concurso</s> la competitividad entre <s>los </s>negocios, hay <em>una mayor</em> motivación <s>a</s> para proveer los servicios rápidamente y en una manera eficiente. Si viviera en un pueblo, yo estaría muy aburrido. Me encantan los museos, las atracciones turísticas, etc. de las ciudades grandes. <s>Entonces</s>Por eso, la vida en los pueblos no es para mí.

    ¡Hola Ernest! Te felicito por tu texto y tengo que decirte que la vida en los pueblos tampoco es para mí, jejeje. Te voy a dejar algunas anotaciones sobre el texto y mi corrección:

    + Conocer a + personas, es cierto. Pero cuando se trata de persona "definidas". Me explico con unos ejemplos:
    <ul><li>Mañana conoceré A los padres de mi pareja. </li><li>Conocí a Juan el año pasado. </li><li>Siempre que viajo conozco la gente más interesante de la ciudad. </li></ul>
    También con alguien y nadie
    <ul><li>No conozco a nadie en esta fiesta</li><li>Tú conocías a alguien de Tenerife, ¿No?</li></ul>
    Pero cuando hablamos en general, como es el caso de tu texto, no debes usar la preposición A:
    <ul><li>Me gusta mucho conocer personas diferentes / gente diferente. </li></ul>

    Esta frase no está mal:
    <em> </em>Debido <s>al concurso</s> la competitividad entre <s>los </s>negocios, hay una mayor motivación <s>a</s> para proveer los servicios rápidamente y en una manera eficiente.
    Pero yo en tu lugar la reformularía para que fuera más clara y consistente. Por ejemplo así:
    Debido a la alta competitividad entre negocios, los servicios son más rápidos y eficientes.

    ¡Sigue trabajando así! Si estás interesado en mejorar tu español, te invito a visitar mi perfil de profesora y a reservar una clase de prueba que se adapte a tus objetivos. ¡Pasa un sábado maravilloso!
    Jara


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    November 2, 2019
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    Mis tutores: El raro, la simpática, la preparada y el Diablo

    Ya hace casi un mes que<s> yo he estudiado</s> estoy estudiando por italki. Me encuentro con tres tutores de todo del mundo que me <s>habían </s> han ayudado muchísimo. Los descubro pero voy a cambiar <s>los </s> sus nombres <s>suyos </s>para proteger su identidad.

    Ana es de la montañas. Me fascina su estilo sensible, se ríe mucho y su sonrisa es brillante. Ella es muy motivadora siempre dándome buen consejos.

    Juana no vive en su país <s>nativo </s> de origen para realizar su sueños y hacer una mejor vida para si misma. Ella es muy preparada y toma notas durante nuestras clases para que yo no tengA que hacerlo. ¡Que bueno!

    Y finalmente, Claudio. Es un artista, pastor espiritual y Youtuber. Él me enseña mucho de la jerga de su nación. Él es un hombre muy paciente que le gusta bromear y hacer chistes cuando no está hablando de las teorías de conspiración religiosa. Me decía que este noviembre llega una conspiración mundial en que gente que adoran al Diablo tiene un plan de secuestrar a los niños de todas partes para sacrificarlos. ¡Hay que tener cuidado!

    <em>¡Hola Jay! Tus tres profesores parecen increíbles y súper interesantes aunque tengo que admitir que la teoría de Claudio me pone los pelos de punta...</em><em style="background-color: rgb(240, 102, 102);"> ;) </em><em> . Veo que están haciendo un muy buen trabajo enseñándote español. Te he hecho alguna correcciones, muy pocas y muy pequeñas. ¡Sigue trabajando así! </em>
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    October 27, 2019
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    Las bicicletas.

    Esta presentación tiene como propósito analizar los problemas del uso de las bicicletas en urbes españolas y proponer algunas soluciones para que aumente dicho uso.
    Salta a la vista que el uso de las bicicletas tiene numerosas ventajas. Antes que nada, es un transporte sostenible. En segundo lugar, las personas que van en bici cada día sufren menos <s>de las</s> enfermedades provocadas por un estilo de vida sedentario. Además, la bici da una agradable sensación de libertad y es divertida.
    A pesar de los beneficios mencionados anteriormente, solo en pocas ciudades modernas este vehículo ha llegado a ser protagonista. Si en Ámsterdam casi el 50% de los ciudadanos se mueve en bici, en España estos números no alcanzan ni un 10%. Es más, en Madrid la cuota es solo del 0,3%. Cabe destacar que pocas ciudades están adaptadas para este tipo de transporte. Según las estadísticas, ir en bicicleta supone más peligro que ir en coche. De todos modos, las bicis son menos peligrosas que las motos. Llama la atención el hecho de que los ciclistas no siempre respetan las normas de prioridad, lo que puede provocar accidentes tanto con los peatones como con los coches. A partir de los estudios se puede observar que en el 25% de los accidentes <s>involucra </s> están/se ven involucrados <s>los </s>menores de 18 años que usan este vehículo para divertirse <s>y</s> e impresionar a los demás sin pensar mucho sobre las <s>conséquences</s> consecuencias de sus acciones.
    No hace falta mencionar que se puede hacer más para promover este tipo de transporte <em style="color: rgb(178, 178, 0);">(aquí debería mencionar a qué tipo de transporte te refieres, si no lo haces es confuso) </em>y disminuir la cantidad de accidentes. Lo más recomendable es aumentar la cantidad de los carriles para las bicicletas --> carriles bici. . Otra buena idea es dar prioridad a un determinado tipo de transporte en zonas diferentes de las ciudades.--> en las diferentes zonas de una ciudad. Una de las posibles soluciones sería reducir la velocidad máxima en los sitios más comerciales y peatonales, favoreciendo el uso de la bici.
    Además de imponer el límite de velocidad y <s>pacificar </s> apaciguar el tráfico, es imprescindible acercar el trasporte público a la ciudadanía para que sea posible viajar con la bici en metro y en tren. <em>Si estas medidas fuer</em><em style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">a</em><em>n adaptadas, la bicicleta podría finalmente formar parte de la movilidad urbana habitual.</em>
    Para terminar, se puede subrayar que, a diferencia de la situación hace unos decenios, se observan mejores resultados en cuanto a la cantidad de ciclistas y el uso de vehículos más ecológicos. La infraestructura también va mejorando. Tomando en cuenta estos datos es de prever que dicha tendencia continúe.

    <em style="color: rgb(68, 68, 68);">Hola María. Supongo que te estás preparando para pasar la prueba del DELE C1 y te puedo decir que este texto está casi impecable. Yo te diría que tuvieras un poco de cuidado en el uso de las estructuras más complejas, como por ejemplo la segunda condicional (recuerda que se forma con Si+imperfecto de subjuntivo, condicional). Te he corregido algunos errores (mínimos) y reformulado algunas frases para que, simplemente, fueran más directas y más claras. </em>
    <em style="color: rgb(68, 68, 68);">Usas muy bien los conectores y marcadores discursivos, pero ten cuidado con no usarlos en exceso. A veces las fórmulas más simples aportan una mayor claridad al discurso. Recuerda que se trata de que el texto este BIEN cohesionado y estructurado, no sobrecargado de fórmulas. </em>
    <em style="color: rgb(68, 68, 68);">Te felicito por tu trabajo, y no puedo estar más de acuerdo sobre el tema de las bicis.</em><em> ;)</em>
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    October 27, 2019
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    Diario de progreso (001)

    Finalmente he preguntado a mis amigos si quieren celebrar mi 30 cumpleaños en España conmigo.
    <s>Ya</s> Todavía no sé a dónde vamos <s>y</s> ni exactamente cuándo (<s>aparte</s> a partir del 4 de junio) pero <s>otros </s>ocho meses deberían _ser_ suficiente para planear todo.
    En <s>todo </s> cualquier caso, voy a usar este libro pequeño para practicar mi español escrito y también para documentar mi progreso y encontrar<s> a</s> palabras que <s>Ya</s> Todavía no sé o <s>a </s>estructuras gramaticales que estoy usando <s>falsamente.</s> mal/de forma incorrecta.
    El otro día <s>he tuiteado</s> tuiteé <s>algo en el que pregunté</s> una pregunta (un poquito retórica<s>mente</s>) _sobre_ <s>qué </s>cuál es el secreto de los hispanohablantes, por - qué pueden entenderse el uno al otro cuando hablan <s>con</s> a una velocidad de 3245 palabras por minuto. Las palabras ya no tienen fronteras audibles y las frases _se_ convierten en una melodía sin comienzo o fin. ;)
    Por supuesto, y <s>lo era</s> es lo que toda la gente me dice, me falta <s>la </s>práctica y simplemente bastante inmersión en el español <s>audible </s> oral. Claro.
    Pero por alguna razón me he preguntado por qué no <s>estoy </s> soy capaz entender todo<s> por lo menos </s> ya que <s>estoy</s> llevo aprendiendo español <s>por</s> muuucho tiempo.
    La solución es tan simple - ¡escucha más!
    Escuchar más es solamente uno de muchos puntos en mi lista _de_ cómo puedo mejorar mi español, pero espero que, con bastante práctica, <s>voy a mejorarme</s> mejore y <s>voy a estar</s> sea capaz de hablar con toda la gente hispanohablante<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">s</s> durante mis vacaciones el próximo año.
    ¡Vamos a ver!

    <ol><li><em>Cumpleaños, al igual que sacacorchos, tocadiscos, rascacielos, ... es una palabra que termina en S, por lo tanto tienes que escribir siempre la "S" final: El cumpleaños de mi hija fue una locura/ Todos mis cumpleaños han sido divertidísimos. </em></li><li><em>Tienes que repasar la diferencia entre </em><em style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">Ya y Todavía no</em><em> y el uso de </em><em style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">Ser </em><em>y </em><em style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">Estar</em><em>. </em></li><li><em>Es genial tu uso de expresiones hechas como </em><em style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">"En cualquier caso".</em><em> No importa que los confundas, algún día lo usarás perfecto. ¡También te felicito por el uso de conectores y marcadores discursivos!</em></li><li><em>Ten cuidad con la diferencia entre </em><em style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">por qué</em><em> --> Lo usamos para preguntar la causa: "¿</em><em style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">Por qu</em><em>é estás tan feliz?" y </em><em style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">porque</em><em> --> conector de causa: "Estoy feliz </em><em style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">porque </em><em>ha salido el sol". </em></li><li><em>Con verbos de deseo, como </em><em style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">esperar</em><em>, debes usar un subjuntivo o infinitivo, dependiendo del número de sujetos involucrados en la frase. </em></li></ol>

    Sigue trabajando así y ya verás como tu español mejora mucho. Intentas usar estructuras nuevas, y eso es genial, pero a veces lo más simple es lo más correcto. En cuanto a lo de entender a la gente hispanohablante... jejeje, es verdad que hablamos rápido. Te recomiendo que hagas escuchas activas, es decir, que cuando escuches un podcast o cualquier audio escribas las palabras que te resultan complicadas, nuevas, divertidas... No te hace falta un papel, puedes usar tu móvil. ¡Yo lo hago con el inglés y funciona súper!
    Es verdad que practicar es importante, pero tenemos que hacerlo con concentración para que todo nuestro trabajo de sus frutos. ¡Sigue así y estoy segura de que en tus próximas vacaciones (usamos esta palabra siempre en plural, las vacaciones) podrás tener conversaciones increíbles con hispanohablantes!
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    October 27, 2019
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    ¡Hola! Recuerda esta regla y nunca más vas a tener esta duda: Si + presente de subjuntivo es SIEMPRE INCORRECTO. SIEMPRE. Por lo tango, "Si tengas" es incorrecto en cualquier circunstancia. ;)
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    September 6, 2019
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    Hi Marzy, for beginner level I would recommend to watch cartoons for really small child, so you can start having some notions about the language. Learning only by books when you're beginner is quiet difficult, but there is an publisher house that I really like called Editorial Difusión. They have all their books at their website and some of them have also an online version. Hope I helped you!! PD: If you decided to have lessons with a teacher, check my teacher profile!!
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    September 6, 2019
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