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Hi, I'm Max! I'm from the US and I really enjoy learning languages. Looking forward to learning with the help of Italki 😁
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    Relatives

    Hi there!

    It is better for children if the whole family including aunts, uncles and so on are involved in a child’s upbringing, rather than just their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

    Today, a lot of families, especially living in big cities, don't have enough time to meet with their parents and other close relatives regularly, some of them are usually able to see each other only a few times in a<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">n</s> year. It's getting more difficult for many families to involve other <s>ralatives</s> relatives in their <s>children'</s> children's upbringing but some of them try to limit the influence of others on their children on purpose.

    Involving other relatives <s>in growing up of</s> while raising children might be very useful for parents who <s>should often be out of home</s> are often not home, because there <s>will</s> would (I would use "would" here because it is a hypothetical situation) be no problem for them to find <s>anyone</s> someone who doesn't mind to <s>spend</s> spending a few hours looking after <s>the</s> their children. A lot of people appreciate such help because it allows them <s>not</s> to not be worried about their children while they are away and <s>keep</s> save their money not hiring a babysitter. Involving others <s>in bringing up of</s> while raising children might also allow children to build good relationships with their parents' relatives. Keeping good relationships with the relatives might <s>get</s> allow them to help and support <s>to </s>the children in difficult situations if they need<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">s</s> it.

    Though keeping contact<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">s</s> is very important, especially today, a lot of parents try to avoid anyone who would like to take a part in bringing up of their children. I suppose such parents believe that there's no one <s>accept</s> except themselves who knows what their children really need. Any outside influence on their children might be valued negatively by them.

    Considering both viewpoints of this issue, I think that it's definitely important to allow other relatives to take a part in bringing up children, of course, if they are good people and aren't able to influence <s>on</s> the children negatively. This action might build and keep great relationships between children and other members of a family and close relatives. and give children more opportunities in the future.

    Final thoughts: Great job! I like the way you showed both sides of the issue. Just a couple changes for certain phrases and words. Very impressive 😃
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    August 16, 2020
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    Il Mio Primo Passagio in Italiano Ciao tutti! Mi chiamo Max. Voglio imparare l’italiano. Penso che la lingua sia bella, e mi interessa perchĂ© mio padre Ăš italiano, e miei nonni erano nati in Italia. Mio padre non parla italiano, ma vorrei imparare la lingua e po’ essere un giorno posso venire in Italia. Io vengo delgi Stati-Uniti, quindi la mia lingua materna Ăš l’inglese. Per il momento leggo qualche libro per aiutarmi ad imprare. Sarei molto grato se qualcuna/o potrebbe corregere il mio pasaggio. Grazie mille! -Max
    July 28, 2019
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    Perfect age for getting married

    Marriage is a common subject for young girls of my age. Like the most of girls I'm inclined to deem this event one of the most important in our life. To my mind, every year young people become more and more careful with marriage. I repeatedly mused upon my future husband and have come to conclusion that I won't decide what person I need until I determine my own aims for the in life. And to determine them I need a time and maybe some more life experience. According to the statistics most of couples divorces. Come to think of it there is a common mistake which people make. Falling in love they tend to get married on the spur of the moment. And then while feeling that they ice each other they decide to give a birth to a baby and thus compound their mistake. I think that the most appropriate age for getting married is twenty five of if they have had have been together at least three years. Perhaps I'm a bit exaggerate exaggerating a bit the bad consequences of a hasty marriage but it's anyway better anyways to wait until you are sure you have found the right person for being with you for life. to be with for life.


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    Nicely written! The sentence I highlighted in orange just needs to be rephrased, since it's hard to understand. All of the other words/sentences highlighted in yellow were small mistakes. Keep writing and I hope to see you post more :D

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    May 18, 2019
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    SynthĂšse 1 – Max Bonjour tout le monde! Dans ce poste j’ai fait une synthĂšse de deux articles oĂč j’ai dĂ» utiliser moins de 240 mots. Si vous le pouvez, pourriez-vous corriger mes fautes de grammaire ? Merci 😊 ! Les baleines et phoques sont des animaux qui sont irremplaçable concernant la vie au Grand Nords, tandis que les bisons sont sacrĂ©s dans la culture des amĂ©rindiens. Dans ce cadre, les politiques qui sont mis en place par l’aide des organisations environnementales affectent directement les indigĂšnes. Il y a deux fronts Ă  constater, la chasse de ces animaux et comment les prĂ©server en pensant aux droits des autochtones et animaux. D’abord, au Grand-Nord, les baleines et les phoques sont centrales pour gagner la vie, nourrir la famille, acheter des mĂ©dicaments, il y a une autonomie qui existe grĂące Ă  la chasse. Cependant, Ă  la fin de la 20e siĂšcle, il y avait plusieurs mouvements pour l’achĂšvement de la chasse traditionnelle. Pourtant pour les amĂ©rindiennes il y a le fait que les bisons sont intĂ©graux dans leur culture. Les amĂ©rindiens ont beaucoup souffert Ă  cause de la chasse de 60 millions de bisons dans les annĂ©es 1860 Ă  1880. Les bisons sont prĂ©cieux, sans eux les amĂ©rindiennes ne seraient pas les mĂȘmes. Tous ces discussions se manifestent dans la politique. Si les organisations environnementales engendrent un changement dans la politique, cela va donc toucher la vie des indigĂšnes. Ainsi, les indigĂšnes montrent leurs propres idĂ©es devant les organisations et les politiques. Pour conclure, tout comme la l’achĂšvement/prĂ©servation de la chasse traditionnelle au Grand-Nord, la manque de protection pour les bisons aux États-Unis touchent prĂšs de chez soi pour tout le monde.
    May 18, 2019
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    What did I do today? 29/04/2019

    I woke up at 7 am, but I did not get up until 8 am. I was chatting on my phone while reading a Spanish book. Then, I had breakfast with my friend. We ate a typical Brazilian dish called Cuscuz. It is made with corn. We also drank orange juice. After that, she went to work and I stayed at home washing dishes and cleaning the mess on the table. Later, in the afternoon, I ate another typical Brazilian dish for lunch. It is called FeijĂŁo (beans) with chorizo and withe with rice. It was so tasty. Then, I studied some Portuguese and English. Finally, at night, I work worked out for an hour. I took a shower and had dinner.

    Very well written!

    Not many mistakes in this notebook entry. The only other thing I would change is I would possibly use a different verb than "chatting" in the second sentence, however I completely understand the sentence. I changed "withe" to "with" , and then I changed the tense of your last sentence to the past tense. Great job!

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    April 29, 2019
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    Hike - Post 3 (En Français) Aujourd’hui j’ai fait une randonnĂ©e dans la forĂȘt avec mon chien. La veille, il pleuvait beaucoup donc quand nous avons commencĂ© Ă  faire de la randonnĂ©e je constatais qu’il y avait de la boue partout. NĂ©anmoins, nous continuions notre randonnĂ©e dans la forĂȘt ensemble. C’était tranquille, parce que nous ne pouvions entendre que les oiseaux qui chantait, et la bruit des bouts de bois qui Ă©crasait sous nos pieds pendant on marchait. À la fin, j’ai notĂ© que mon chien Ă©tait complĂštement sale Ă  cause de la boue, car c’était irrĂ©sistible pour lui de ne pas y jouer. Il a les poils longs et blancs alors il se fait salir facilement. AprĂšs ĂȘtre rentrĂ©s, je l’ai lavĂ©, et nous nous sommes dĂ©contractĂ©s Ă  la maison. Donc voilĂ , j'espĂšre que vous avez aimĂ© cette petite histoire! Si vous le pouvez, pourriez-vous corriger mes fautes de grammaire ? Merci 😊 ! -Max
    April 14, 2019
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    Second Post - Splatoon 2 (En Français) Bonjour tout le monde, j’espĂšre que vous allez bien ! Je vais essayer de faire des postes souvent, pour que je puisse amĂ©liorer mon niveau de français. Je suis dĂ©terminĂ© ! Aujourd’hui je vais parler des jeux vidĂ©os, plus prĂ©cisĂ©ment Splatoon 2. Je viens d’acheter ce jeu il y a trois jours parce que j’avais une carte cadeau chez GameStop (un vendeur des jeux vidĂ©os ici aux US), et beaucoup de mes amis en jouent. Alors, qu’est-ce que c’est ? Ce jeu a Ă©tĂ© créé par Nintendo. C’est un jeu vidĂ©o de tir en vue Ă  la troisiĂšme personne, oĂč vous jouez comme un calamar (un « Inkling ») ou un poulpe (un « Octoling ») qui peut transformer en humain (notamment pour tirer). Il faut tirer de l’encre pour avancer ou combattre des autres. Vous pouvez nager dans l’encre pour se dĂ©placer plus rapidement en forme calamar/poulpe. Le jeu est basĂ© sur le multijoueur, oĂč vous pouvez jouer avec vos amis en ligne. Il existe beaucoup de modes pour jouer comme mode solo, guerre de territoire, dĂ©fense de zone, etc. Normalement dans chaque mode le concept de mettre l’encre partout est gardĂ©. Par exemple, dans le mode guerre de territoire il y a deux Ă©quipes, chaque Ă©quipe a sa propre couleur d’encre, et l’équipe qui a mis le plus d’ancre sur le champ de bataille Ă  la fin gagnerait. Aussi, vous pouvez acheter des vĂȘtements pour personnalisez votre Inkling / Octoling dans le jeu (pour ĂȘtre plus stylĂ© que les autres). Donc voilĂ , j'espĂšre que ça vous aura intĂ©ressĂ©s un peu ! Si vous le pouvez, pourrez-vous corriger mes fautes de grammaire ? Merci 😊 ! -Max (L’image est de Nintendo Life)
    April 11, 2019
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    It has been a month since I registered with italki.

    It has been a month since I registered with italki.

    Thank you very much to everyone who sent me a message! 😆
    Also, I'm very sorry for making some people feel disappointed,   it's my fault! đŸ˜ą
    (I couldn't receive notifications and also neglected to check italki.)

    I talked to some English speakers and friends online sometimes in  Japanese too.
    I learned a lot.
    I reconfirmed that I was not good at speaking and my vocabulary is small after all.
    My speaking may be a little annoying for those who I talked with, but they are kind so I was less nervous more than before.

    I will write more in detail from next time.
    Thank you for reading this note.🐩
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    April 10, 2019
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    My time in France (First Post) (En Français) Bonjour tout le monde, j'espĂšre que vous allez bien! Je m'appelle Max, j'ai 22 ans et j'habite aux États-Unis. Vu que c'est la premiĂšre fois que j'Ă©cris un petit post comme ceci, je vais vous raconter une histoire de le temps que j'ai passĂ© rĂ©cemment en France. À la fin d'aoĂ»t 2018, j'ai fait la dĂ©cision de voyager en France. J'ai reçu mon diplĂŽme en comptabilitĂ© et en français Ă  l'UniversitĂ© en mai et je voulais Ă©chapper un peu et crĂ©er des nouvelles expĂ©riences. Donc, quoi de mieux que d'aller voyager en Europe! J'ai louĂ© un petit appartement (9mÂČ) Ă  Rennes, qui se trouve dans le nord-ouest de la France. En Ă©tant une ville Ă©tudiante, j'ai rencontrĂ© beaucoup d'amis internationals que je n'oublierai jamais. Dans le complexe oĂč se trouvait mon appartement il y avait trois italiens avec qui j'ai passĂ© beaucoup de temps. Ensemble on a voyagĂ©, Ă©tudiĂ©, et on s'est amusĂ©. En fait ils sont la raison pour laquelle j'ai commencĂ© Ă  apprendre l'italien. Je viens de rentrer aux États-Unis, et maintenant je suis en cherche de travail ici. J'aimerais vraiment retourner en Europe quand j'ai assez de temps et j'encourage n'importe qui qui veut voyager de le faire si vous pouvez. Donc voilĂ  ma petite histoire, j'espĂšre que ça vous a plu! Si vous pourriez, corrigeriez-vous les fautes de grammaire? Merci 😊 ! A la prochaine, -Max (La photo est de Saint-Brieuc)
    April 10, 2019
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