Perfect age for getting married Marriage is a common subject for young girls of my age. Like the most of girls I'm inclined to deem this event one of the most important in our life. To my mind, every

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Perfect age for getting married Marriage is a common subject for young girls of my age. Like the most of girls I'm inclined to deem this event one of the most important in our life. To my mind, every year young people become more and more careful with marriage. I repeatedly mused upon my future husband and have come to conclusion that I won't decide what person I need until I determine my own aims for the life. And to determine them I need a time and maybe some more life experience. According to the statistics most of couples divorces. Come to think of it there is a common mistake which people make. Falling in love they tend to get married on the spur of the moment. And then while feeling that they ice each other they decide to give a birth to a baby and thus compound their mistake. I think that the most appropriate age for getting married is twenty five of they have had been together at least three years. Perhaps I'm a bit exaggerate bad consequences of hasty marriage but it's anyway better to wait until you are sure you have found the right person for being with you for life.

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Marriage is a common subject for young girls of my age. Like the most of girls, I'm inclined to deem this event one of the most important moments in our lives. In my mind, every year young people become more and more careful with marriage. I have repeatedly mused upon my future husband and have come to conclusion that I won't decide what person I need until I determine my own goals for life. To determine these goals, I need time and more life experience. According to the statistics the majority of marriages end in divorce. Come to think of it there is a common mistake which people make. Falling in love, they tend to get married on the spur of the moment. Then, they quickly decide to have a baby, thus compounding their poor choice. I think that the most appropriate age for getting married is 25, (Generally, numbers lower than ten are written out, and numbers above ten are written numerically)if they have had been together for at least three years. Perhaps I am exaggerating the consequences of a hasty marriage, but it's better to wait until you are sure you have found the right person to spend your life with.

Perfect age for getting married

Marriage is a common subject for young girls of my age. Like the most of girls I'm inclined to deem this event one of the most important in our life. To my mind, every year young people become more and more careful with marriage. I repeatedly mused upon my future husband and have come to conclusion that I won't decide what person I need until I determine my own aims for the in life. And to determine them I need a time and maybe some more life experience. According to the statistics most of couples divorces. Come to think of it there is a common mistake which people make. Falling in love they tend to get married on the spur of the moment. And then while feeling that they ice each other they decide to give a birth to a baby and thus compound their mistake. I think that the most appropriate age for getting married is twenty five of if they have had have been together at least three years. Perhaps I'm a bit exaggerate exaggerating a bit the bad consequences of a hasty marriage but it's anyway better anyways to wait until you are sure you have found the right person for being with you for life. to be with for life.

My Comments:

Nicely written! The sentence I highlighted in orange just needs to be rephrased, since it's hard to understand. All of the other words/sentences highlighted in yellow were small mistakes. Keep writing and I hope to see you post more :D

The perfect age for getting married

Marriage is a common subject for young girls of my age. Like the most of girls, I'm inclined to deem this event one of the most important in our life. To In my mind, every year young people become more and more careful with marriage. I repeatedly mused upon my future husband and have come to the conclusion that I won't decide what person I need until I determine my own aims for the in life. And to determine them I need a time and maybe some more life experience. According to the statistics, most of couples divorces. Come to think of it, there is a common mistake which people make. When falling in love, they tend to get married on the spur of the moment. And then while feeling that they ice each other they decide to give a birth to a baby and thus compound their mistake. I think that the most appropriate age for getting married is twenty-five of if they have had been together at least three years. Perhaps I'm a bit exaggerate exaggerating the bad consequences of hasty marriage a bit but it's anyway better to wait until you are sure you have found the right person for being to be with you for life anyway.

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I'm not exactly sure what you mean by "they ice each other", so I left it untouched.

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