Pet: Jun 04, 2010 I like dogs better than cats. I think they’re more friendly. My favorite is Golden Retrievers because they look cuddly and playful. I might not be a good trainer. I’m too lenient with them. Actually I don’t have a dog right now. I’ve been lived in an apartment, so it was difficult to breed pets. I like big dogs. My home is not big enough to raise them though. I was about 19 years old when my uncle gave me puppies. They were just one-month-old and so cute. Both of them were black entirely. There names had yet to be named and I just called them Ya and Hey. That wasn’t with special meanings. Threr were nobody who can take care of them because I and my brother were students. In addition, my parents ware a couple working together for a living. Consequently, I was forced to adopt them out to my grandparent’s. There are big garden and many mountain around so there is the best environment for pets to grow up in. Since then, I occationally visited there whenever my vacations and they seem to notice me. Each time I visited there I enjoyed walking the dogs. I didn’t need to get hold of the dogs by its collar so we got around the village freely. Come to think of it, I guess they were Labrador Retrievers.

Second: May 31, 2010 ㅠ ㅠ (crying) It's too dificult to explain the situation but I'll do my best !!!! Can you see my photo? This is map of Seoul subway stations. It consists of 14 lines so it's very complicated, especially for aged people. It would be a maze if you were at transfer station. There was a old lady who didn't know which way to go. A station was her destination. I was aware that A is on the line No. 2. I guided her because it was on my way. Then we reached a fork. There were two stairs. --(stairs)------ (The third basement) │ │ >>>>(train "C")>>>>>>>>(The third basement) me & old lady ( the second basement ) -----│ │ │ <<<<<(train "D")<<<<<<< (The third basement) │ ---(stairs)------ (The third basement) If you choose one of two and walk down the stairs, you'll get on the train bound for C. Otherwise, you'll get on the train bound for D. I didn't know where A is bound for. If you know terminal's ( the last station ) name of which you want to go, you'll choose the direction easily. Because only terminal and major stations are written in the sign. I thought she was aware of terminal's name and I asked "Is it bound for C ?" then she said "Maybe that's right." So I told her confidently "You can get there by going this way". Later on, I found out that was wrong the direction. It was my mistake! I told her the way in D's direction! I concerned about her because she has to go up and down the stairs. In addition, She was a elder! I couldn't find her even though I tried. But then later I took the subway and accidently saw the map of subway system. I found out that A is on the way bound for D !! Wow!! That finally made me feel at ease. That was a joint effort by mistakes of her and mine. _______________________________________________________________________ I wish my correction could convey the meaning more clearly. It took for about 4 hours to finish. It made me mad. ㅠ ㅠ However I really appreciate your attention. Your corretions encourage me to cheer up!

My experience: May 29, 2010 I want to tell my friend about my story. Could you remake that in your style? (reference map: B station ----- I'm here ----------- A station ) Yesterday, I met a woman at the transfer station (subway). She asked me "Which way is the A station?" I don't know exactly so I asked her. "Is it on the way of B station?" She said "Yes, right.". I said, "You can go this way". She said "Thank you, you are so kind" A little while later I found out that was wrong direction. It was exactly opposite direction! I tried to find her but she alredy gone. I coultn't find her. I blamed myself. "Why didn't I think carefully." Then I took a subway and accidently saw the map of subway. I found out that A station is in the opposite direction from B station! Eventually, it was right! I was relax so I could go on my way without worry. It's real story of me yesterday. I hope tell entertainingly the story to my friend in English. Help me. It doesn't matter whether your correct is informal. I prefer informal. Correct it as if you talk to your friend. Thank you.