Why some people feel there are too much many choices.

As of before Before World War 2, our consuming activity consumerism was limited because of poor technology. For example, if you wanted to buy a car at this time, you wouldn't couldn't choose what to buy. There were a few choices available to select because the car industry didn't have the technology to care about things for another thing like the exterior.

The things Things had changed after the devastated devastation of war. People focused on improving technology and making a lot of money in stead instead of fighting with each other. People could get money, and buy many products. Company Companies <wbr>which made that those products got high profits, so their workers earned a lot of salaries high salary. And then these workers consumed variety types a variety of products.

Advertising companies added to this continuing consumerism and created values. That These values were broadcasted by media such as TV, and people received these values them. Advertisement created desires to consume these values in people's minds, and company was companies were eager to respond to that those demands.

In order to clear this state make this state clear, I'm going to take an example: Why people want to buy Lexus cars. Lexus is a high luxury brand of Toyota. It's expensive, but really cool. Considering these two functions the functions of these two, both of them are almost the same. (some of Toyota cars are better than Lexus ones.). So, why do people want to get that the more expensive car? It's mainly because if you get a high luxury brand's car, you feel a kind of superiority and attract attentions from their your sur<wbr>roundings. Therefore, these people tend to consume not their functions but values. Nowadays, this system is spreading in our society and can be applied to our consumption consuming activity.Thus, there are plenty of products are created now and some people feel there are too much many choices.

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Good job! One complicated note: about the use of parentheses. If you put a phrase in parentheses in a sentence, it should be placed before the period. For example:

Both of them are almost the same (some Toyota cars are better than Lexus ones).

This is the correct usage. Typically, you should not put a period inside the parentheses.