A letter for my friend (IELTS)
Hi, Mike. Long time no see. I am writing this letter for asking something about Sydney where you has been living now. As you know I have studied English for more than five years at an university in Japan and I want to go abroad to learn more both English and custom of other countries. So I decided to go to Sydney to enroll to one of the local universities but I have no idea which university is suite for me and how to apply it.
You are living this city so long time and you have graduated local school so you quite keen to those things. When you were student of university, there were a number of teachers or stuffs around you. I mean that I guess you still keep in touch with some of them. If you connect them to me, it will be a good chance to me. I really trust and depend on you.
If you have a time, please call me. My phone number is 000-000-000.
I am really looking forward to hearing a good news from you
Best wishes,
Tom
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Hi, Mike. Long time no see. I am writing this letter for asking to ask you something about Sydney, where you has been living now have been living. As you know, I have studied English for more than five years at an university in Japan, and I want to go abroad to learn more both English and custom of other countries both learn more English and learn more about the customs of other countries. So I decided to go to Sydney to enroll to in one of the local universities, but I have no idea which university is suite suitable for me and how to apply to it.
Youare living have been living in this city so long time for such a long time and you have graduated from a local school so you must be quite keen to those things. When you were student of university a university student, there were a number of teachers or stuffs around you. I mean that I guess you still must keep in touch with some of them. If you could connect us them to me, it will would be a good chance to for me. I really trust and depend on you.
If you havea time, please call me. My phone number is 000-000-000.
I am really looking forward to hearinga good news from you
Best wishes,
Tom
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Good job Tom, some notes...
If a sentence is very long, you can make it more readable by separating the clauses with a comma.
Even though we usually use "an" instead of "a" before a noun that begins with a vowel, we say "a university" because university is pronounced with a "y" sound at the beginning.
About the sentence "... and I want to go abroad to both learn more English and learn more about the customs of other countries." It's a little confusing, but I'll try to explain. It would be totally correct to say "I want to go to school to learn both English and algebra." You can put "both" after "learn" in this sentence because English and algebra are both nouns. But because "about the customs of other countries" is a more complex phrase, it sounds more natural to say it this way... "I want to go abroad to both learn more English and learn more about the customs of other countries."
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If you have
I am really looking forward to hearing
Best wishes,
Tom
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Good job Tom, some notes...
If a sentence is very long, you can make it more readable by separating the clauses with a comma.
Even though we usually use "an" instead of "a" before a noun that begins with a vowel, we say "a university" because university is pronounced with a "y" sound at the beginning.
About the sentence "... and I want to go abroad to both learn more English and learn more about the customs of other countries." It's a little confusing, but I'll try to explain. It would be totally correct to say "I want to go to school to learn both English and algebra." You can put "both" after "learn" in this sentence because English and algebra are both nouns. But because "about the customs of other countries" is a more complex phrase, it sounds more natural to say it this way... "I want to go abroad to both learn more English and learn more about the customs of other countries."
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