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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
i am a chinese girl.Now i am a sophomore. i like English very much so i choose it as my major.I want to make friends with foreign friends.
Hello,
You are doing very well. I only need to help you a little. Your first two sentences are perfect except you need to capitalize "I". We write I, not i.
Your third sentence, "i like English very much so i choose it as my major", should say, "I like English very much so i chose it as my major."
Your last sentence, "I want to make friends with foreign friends" should say " I want to make friends with foreigners".
I am glad you enjoy English, good luck!
0 votedNovember 1, 20110First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am a chinese girl.23years old.i lived in korean 3 years old,i am interesting in english .i want study with you.3Q
Hi!
I'm not a teacher here, but I thought I would help you. The first sentence, "I am a chinese girl." is perfect English. Good job! The second part, "23 years old" is not a sentence. You should say "I am 23 years old."
I lived in Korean 3 years old should say "I have lived in Korea 3 years" or "I have lived in Korea since I was 3 years old".
"I am interesting in English" should say " I am interested in English". That one was pretty good!
"i want study with you". This is perfect except we write I, not i.
I think you are doing very well.
Rose
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