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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am a chinese girl.23years old.i lived in korean 3 years old,i am interesting in english .i want study with you.3Q

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a chinese girl.23years old.i lived in korean 3 years old,i am interesting in english .i want study with you.3Q

 

Hi!

I'm not a teacher here, but I thought I would help you.  The first sentence, "I am a chinese girl."  is perfect English.  Good job!  The second part, "23 years old" is not a sentence.  You should say "I am 23 years old." 

I lived in Korean 3 years old should say "I have lived in Korea 3 years" or "I have lived in Korea since I was 3 years old".

"I am interesting in English" should say " I am interested in English".  That one was pretty good!

"i want study with you".  This is perfect except we write I, not i.

I think you are doing very well. 

Rose

 

 

 

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a chinese girl. I am 23 years old. I lived in Korean 3 years old ago.I am interesteding in learning English. I want study with you. 3Q

i lived in korean 3 years old---

한국에서어렸을때부터살아요?

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a chinese girl. I am 23years old.I lived in korea for 3 years ,i am interested in studying English .I  want to study with you.3Q

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A little more help....

I am a chinese girl. I am 23 years old.

I lived in Korea for twenty years.

I lived in Korea since I was three years old but now I am back in China.

I am interested in studying English .

I want to study with you.3Q

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a chinese girl.i am 23years old.i lived in korean 3 years i am interested in english .i want to study with you.3Q

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