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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am a chinese girl.23years old.i lived in korean 3 years old,i am interesting in english .i want study with you.3Q
Hi!
I'm not a teacher here, but I thought I would help you. The first sentence, "I am a chinese girl." is perfect English. Good job! The second part, "23 years old" is not a sentence. You should say "I am 23 years old."
I lived in Korean 3 years old should say "I have lived in Korea 3 years" or "I have lived in Korea since I was 3 years old".
"I am interesting in English" should say " I am interested in English". That one was pretty good!
"i want study with you". This is perfect except we write I, not i.
I think you are doing very well.
Rose
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am a chinese girl. I am 23 years old. I lived in Korean 3 years old ago.I am interesteding in learning English. I want study with you. 3Q
i lived in korean 3 years old---
한국에서어렸을때부터살아요?
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am a chinese girl. I am 23years old.I lived in korea for 3 years ,i am interested in studying English .I want to study with you.3Q
A little more help....
I am a chinese girl. I am 23 years old.
I lived in Korea for twenty years.
I lived in Korea since I was three years old but now I am back in China.
I am interested in studying English .
I want to study with you.3Q
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am a chinese girl.i am 23years old.i lived in korean 3 years i am interested in english .i want to study with you.3Q
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