First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a Chinese girl. Right now I am a sophomore. I like English very much, so I choose chose it as my major. I want to make friends with foreign friends.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i am a chinese girl.Now i am a sophomore. i like English very much so i choose it as my major.I want to make friends with foreign friends.

Hello,

You are doing very well.  I only need to help you a little.  Your first two sentences are perfect except you need to capitalize "I".  We write I, not i.

Your third sentence, "i like English very much so i choose it as my major", should say, "I like English very much so i chose it as my major."

Your last sentence, "I want to make friends with foreign friends" should say " I want to make friends with foreigners".

I am glad you enjoy English, good luck!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a Chinese girl. Now i am I am now a sophomore. I like English very much, so i choose it as my major. I want to make friends with foreign friends.