Pocahontas

Have you ever come across a challenging and courageous story? This is the main plot of the brand new and lesser-known movie “Pocahontas”. She is a youngster who doesn’t fit in with her tribe back in 1607. Feeling resentful of the insisting demand for marriage, Pocahontas sets out on a new journey following her own path. Thankfully, her grandmother supports her strongly and makes her see the unattainable as achievable. How profound would your willpower and thoughts have been in that time?

This film gives a revealing insight into the injustice that women in the past had to experience. Having said that, Pocahontas plays a compelling performance as a feminist and mature girl. Furthermore, every clip is unpredictable and uncertain owing to the fact that the character's personality is impulsive and rather reckless at times. In the end, Pocahontas' aims turn out well but you will realise how harsh living conditions were in such an epoch.

Even though it is a real life story, there are obvious modifications in the film [a flick is a particular type of film, like a romantic comedy] which interferes in the original thread. If the producers hadn't skipped memorable scenes such as Pocahontas’ imprisonment, the plot would have been more realistic and powerful. To the untrained eye, historical flaws related to clothing and biography might be overlooked.

I would highly recommend this film to anyone interested in activism and historical drama. I, for one, was amazed by Pocahontas’ exceptional acts and it made me seek out more information on her story. Without a shadow of a doubt, this is a film not to be missed.

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Some areas in the US are applying a “curfew” which only permits teenagers to be outdoors with the presence of their guardian, after a particular time at night. I believe that this is a positive policy because it keeps adolescents away from dangers and prevents them from committing a crime.

On the one hand, curfew hours will help to keep the youngsters safe from the danger of being kidnapped or injured. Because people from 12 to 16 are not completely mature, which means they are not able to make a suitable decision in some emergencies. Therefore, they are becoming the easy targets of drunks, kidnappers and other criminals. For example, according to a recent survey conducted in 2017, 60% of teenager kidnapping cases happened during nighttime.

On the other hand [This is used to make an opposite point, e.g. there should NOT be a curfew, so it isn't suitable here]. Also, restricting the hours that teenagers can play outside without the observation of adults can prevent them from becoming juvenile criminals. That is to say that young people who are able to play outside at night are prone to buying alcoholic drinks and drugs which utterly cost more than their acceptable allowances. In order to keep buying them, they end up stealing or doing bad things to earn money. For instance, in China 50% of young generations who are usually out at night are addicts and more than 70% of them committed crime in the last 5 years.

In conclusion, setting a curfew for adolescents should be carried out, not only in the US, but also on a global scale since it will help to keep the young generation being safe and prevent them becoming juvenile criminals.