Please help me to correct my essay. Thank you so much! Some areas in the US are applying a “curfew” which solely allows teenagers to be outdoor with the presence of their guardians after a particular time at night. I believe that it is a positive policy because it keeps adolescents away from dangers and prevents them from committing a crime. On the one hand, curfew hours will help to keep the youngers safe from the danger of being kidnapped or injured. Because people from 12 to 16 are not completely mature which means they are not able to make a precise decision in some emergencies. Therefore, they are becoming the easy targets to drunks, kidnappers and other criminals. For example, according to a recent survey conducted in 2017, 60% of teenager kinapping cases happened during a night time. On the other hand, restricting the hours that teenagers can play outside without the observation of adults can prevent them from becoming juvenile criminals. That is to say that young people who are able to play outside at night are prone to using alcoholic drinks and drugs which utterly cost more than their acceptable allowances. In order to keep having those, they end up stealing or doing bad things to earn money. For instance, in China 50% of young generations who are usually out at night are addicts and more than 70% of them committed crime in the last 5 years. In conclusion, setting a curfew for adolescents should be carried out not only in the US but also in the global scale since it will help to keep young generation being safe and prevent them becoming juvenile criminals.