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- hoping for amendment to make my essay more idiomatic In some developing countries, there are relatively more young adults than older people, and I believe this situation will benefit these countries’ development. First, more young adults will benefit the economic development. Because more young adults means more labor force and lower labor prices, and plenty of international corporations would like to invest in these developing countries to cut the domestic labor costs. For example, China has a large amount of cheap labor force, which attracts a lot of foreign capital and helps China achieve the great economic development goal. After all, labor force is one of the most competitive resources in most developing countries. In addition, more young adults will enhance the scientific and technologic development. As we all know, young adults can acquire new knowledge easier and quicker than older people, and accelerate the process of industrialization. India, for instance, the government has been encouraging young students to study software, and that’s one of the reasons why India can become the top-class software producer. A country can never be a great scientific and technological pioneer without these young and industrious talents. I would also agree that more young adults can bring some disadvantages, such as population problem. More young adults, higher birth ratio. Overwhelming population will cause the lack of accommodation and environmental pollution. And Chinese government is facing this terrible situation and have to take much energy and substantial sums of money to deal with it. But if the government can use the right policy to guide people, and don’t make the population spiral out of control, population problem can be largely mitigated. All in all, I prefer to contend that more young adults is better than more old people in a developing country.February 15, 201951
- Please help me with my essay, and if you are interested in chinese, i will be very happy to helo you i will take ielts examination in Feb, so i am in great need of a native speaker for the english countries to help me with my esssay, and make it like from the native speaker, so, if you want to study chinese, i am very good teacher, i am college student from a esteedmed chinese institution and majoring in law, good at chinese writing and full of available time.January 28, 201900
- Please amend my article to make it like from native speaker As we all know, information is a critical factor of society development, but sharing information without reservation might stifle the creativity in scientific, business and academic field. Some people are strong advocates of sharing information freely, because they believe that can create a much better world, especially in scientific world. They think if all the countries share their core science and technologies with each other, many world-class issues would be solved. For example, there are many challenges now, in clean energy filed, medical field and biogenetic field, as long as the first-tier scientists from different countries work together and share their information as much as possible, and they can achieve something great, which will benefit the whole world. Opponents, however, say some information is not suitable to share with each other, because some information is secret, its disclosure may cause irretrievable damage to the owner. If a company, for instance, put their core information of cost and customer online, all their competitors will study the information immediately, and make corresponding strategies to defeat the company. Then the bankruptcy would be the end of the sharer. In my view, sharing information freely might have an adverse influence on creativity in business and academic field. Creativity is the key to success in both fields, and it needs much energy and many funds. If a company or a scholar can acquire these creative information without any price, that would be so unfair to those paying a lot. If things continue this way, no one would like to invent or create something new, because all of them are waiting for the creative information from others.January 25, 201920

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