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Please amend my article to make it like from native speaker As we all know, information is a critical factor of society development, but sharing information without reservation might stifle the creativity in scientific, business and academic field. Some people are strong advocates of sharing information freely, because they believe that can create a much better world, especially in scientific world. They think if all the countries share their core science and technologies with each other, many world-class issues would be solved. For example, there are many challenges now, in clean energy filed, medical field and biogenetic field, as long as the first-tier scientists from different countries work together and share their information as much as possible, and they can achieve something great, which will benefit the whole world. Opponents, however, say some information is not suitable to share with each other, because some information is secret, its disclosure may cause irretrievable damage to the owner. If a company, for instance, put their core information of cost and customer online, all their competitors will study the information immediately, and make corresponding strategies to defeat the company. Then the bankruptcy would be the end of the sharer. In my view, sharing information freely might have an adverse influence on creativity in business and academic field. Creativity is the key to success in both fields, and it needs much energy and many funds. If a company or a scholar can acquire these creative information without any price, that would be so unfair to those paying a lot. If things continue this way, no one would like to invent or create something new, because all of them are waiting for the creative information from others.

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Please amend my article to make it like from native speaker

As we all know, information is a critical factor of the development of society, but sharing information without reservation might stifle the creativity in the scientific, business and academic field.
Some people are strong advocates of sharing information freely, because they believe that it can create a much better world, especially in the scientific world. They think if all the countries share their core science and technologies knowledge with each other, many world-class issues would be solved. For example, there are many challenges now in the clean energy, medical and bio-genetic field, but as long as the first-tier scientists from different countries work together and share their information as much as possible, and they will be able to achieve something great, which will benefit the whole world.
Opponents, however, say some information is not suitable to share with each other, because some information is secret, = confidential (=better vocab) its disclosure may cause irretrievable damage to the owner. If a company, for instance, put their core information of cost and customer information online, all their competitors would study the information immediately, and make corresponding strategies to take advantage and get the better of the the company. Then the bankruptcy would be the end of the sharer.
In my view, sharing information freely might have an adverse influence on creativity in the business and academic field. Creativity is the key to success in both fields, and it needs much energy and many a large amount of funds. If a company or a scholar can acquire this creative information without any price,, it would be unjust to those paying a lot. If things continue this way, no one would like be willing to invent or create something new, because all of them are  they would be waiting for the creative information from others.

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