hoping for amendment to make my essay more idiomatic In some developing countries, there are relatively more young adults than older people, and I believe this situation will benefit these countries’ development. First, more young adults will benefit the economic development. Because more young adults means more labor force and lower labor prices, and plenty of international corporations would like to invest in these developing countries to cut the domestic labor costs. For example, China has a large amount of cheap labor force, which attracts a lot of foreign capital and helps China achieve the great economic development goal. After all, labor force is one of the most competitive resources in most developing countries. In addition, more young adults will enhance the scientific and technologic development. As we all know, young adults can acquire new knowledge easier and quicker than older people, and accelerate the process of industrialization. India, for instance, the government has been encouraging young students to study software, and that’s one of the reasons why India can become the top-class software producer. A country can never be a great scientific and technological pioneer without these young and industrious talents. I would also agree that more young adults can bring some disadvantages, such as population problem. More young adults, higher birth ratio. Overwhelming population will cause the lack of accommodation and environmental pollution. And Chinese government is facing this terrible situation and have to take much energy and substantial sums of money to deal with it. But if the government can use the right policy to guide people, and don’t make the population spiral out of control, population problem can be largely mitigated. All in all, I prefer to contend that more young adults is better than more old people in a developing country.