Sentences in Chinese :) Thanks

1 你会选择在什么样气候的地方生活?为什么?

我<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 204);">一定</s>很可能选择一个<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 204);">热</s><s>温暖</s>的地方。 只要在附近<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 204); color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">的我家</s>有海，我就喜欢那个地方。

I probably choose to live in a warm place, as long as the sea is near my house, then I like that place. italkii

2这里的气候对你的身体和生活有什么影响?

我住在海口，这个地方特别热， 虽然我很喜欢住在这里，但从四月到十月不能出去，因为<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 204);">空气</s>太热了! 夏天的时候不管你几点出去，总是热极了。

这里的气候<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 204);">让</s>改变了我的活动<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 204); color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">变化一点儿</s>。

例如我在意大利的时候，我每天去附近的公园散散步，我很喜欢运动，但我在中国的时候不能每天都去散步了。

I live in haikou. It's an extremely hot place. Although I like living here, from April and October you can't go outside, because the temperature is too high.

In summer, no matter what time you go out, it's always hot.

The climate of this place has changed my activities a little bit, for example when I'm in Italy I go every day for a walk in the park, I like to exercise a lot, but when I'm in China I can't.

中文有点难

<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">开始</s>以前,我觉得了中文的汉<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">子</s>字和韩语的韩子一样。

所以中文容易一点呢。

<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">不过汉子</s>但是汉字不一样。

说汉语的时候，<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">还有</s>发音有点难。

我<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">还没会中不好</s>的中文还不太好，

我想快<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">好好</s>点儿学会中文。

还有改天我打算去中国旅行<s>改天。</s>

今天<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">也</s>我也学习中文了，

<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">还有</s>虽然每天感

觉<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">得</s>很难

^^

可是我不想停

My morning routine in Chinese! :) Thanks for your help!

你有没有一个<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">早上常务</s>晨间例行事务习惯?

我有一个<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">早上常务</s>晨间例行事务习惯，我特别喜欢5点起床，很多人也许<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">能</s>会觉得我有一点儿<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">发</s>疯狂，但<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">一说话</s>在发表意见之前<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">人</s>你们<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">就</s>应该先试一试。

去年<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">我</s>关于这个话题我读了很多书， 我对这<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">种的</s>类书很感兴趣， 因此从去年十二月开始<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">了</s>我每天5 点起床<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">了</s>。

<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">原来</s>开始特别难，但一个月后我就适应了!

起床以后，我去外面散散步， 然后我回家读书，思考，写我的日记 还学习汉语。

我很喜欢这个<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">常务</s>习惯，因为首先我有时间<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">心想</s>反思我的生<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">命</s>活，其次让我变得放松。

许多人8点起床，9 点去工作，这样他们没有时间<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">省</s>反思自己的生活，特别<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">伤心</s>可悲! 他们做<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">东西</s>，但其实他们不知道为什么做这些。

Do you have a morning routine?

I do have a morning routine, I really like waking up at 5:00 in the morning, a lot of people might think I'm a little crazy, but before they talk people should try it.

Last year I read a lot of books on this subject, I've got a passion for this kind of books, so since last December I wake up every day at 5am. At first it was difficult, then after a month I got used to it.

After waking up I go out for a walk, then I come home i usually read a book, meditate, write my diary and also study Chinese. I really like this routine, because first of all I have time to reflect on my life, and secondly because it makes me feel relaxed.

Many people wake up at 8:00 a.m. and go to work at 9:00 a.m., but in this way they don't have time to reflect on their life, it is very sad. They do things, but they don't really know why they're doing them.

这是个吃小龙虾的季节

我的中文语言学<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">半</s>伴今天跟我说<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">我</s>她晚饭在饭馆吃了<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">晚饭的</s>小龙虾。她喜欢吃<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">了的</s>小龙虾。

她<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">也</s>还说这是个吃小龙虾的季节。

My Chinese language partner told me that she had clay fish for dinner tonight and she enjoyed it.

She also told me it is the season of crayfish.

I wanted to say I have only eaten crayfish once or twice in my life/I seldom eat crayfish.

But due to my lack of Chinese ability, I can’t write it in Chinese.

So your sentence in Chinese would be a great help.

上海的迪士尼

我今天听说上海的迪士尼营业了。

我去过<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">迪士尼在</s>东京，香港，巴黎，洛杉矶和佛罗里达的迪士尼，还没有去过上海的迪士尼。

我未来想去这里<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">未来</s>。

This is my first writing in Chinese.

I am a beginner in Chinese and appreciate your correction in English, if possible.

I couldn’t figure out how I can use ” 、” in Chinese.

Thank you for your correction in advance!

谢谢你的批改/修改/订正。

Which one is the most suitable word in the sentence amongst 批改/修改/订正？批改/修改/订正,在这里都可以使用，意思都可以表示correction.