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- Firstly, all the close relatives and friends visit the mom and congratulate her on giving birth. They get a small gift for the newborn which is most probably a piece of gold. In addition, the newborn’s family have a celebration called a *baby shower* where songs are played and people dance. A large table, full of a variety of food, is also served in the evening. The atmosphere overall is exquisite and charming. I do like going to such parties and enjoy seeing the new little angels 👼0 votedSeptember 6, 20211
- I go to the gym every morning <s>in </s>on weekdaysSince this spring, I have gone to gym more often than before/ever.I went to the gym <s>for jogging</s> to jog on the machine three times a week last winter. But when this spring came, I started to take swimming lessons, so I went to the gym every morning <s>in</s> on weekdays, which is 5 times a week.I <s>benifit</s> benefit a lot from exercising, which is <s>both</s> good for both my body and spirit.Last year, after blowing cold air on <s>wind</s> <s>towards</s> my back and waist with the electric fan for a whole night, I woke up with such huge pain in my waist that I couldn't get up by myself.After that, I got a membership <s>in</s> at the nearest gym and began exercising.I tried to use the habit forming app to help me build good habits like exercising and skin care.But later I found that when you realize the importance of something, and you really enjoy it, it won't be a hard thing at all, it will become a part of your life naturally.I hope this helps Irina! A good piece of work!! Corrections are in yellow and the word in red is just a suggestion! I think areas to improve could be articles and prepositions :) feel free to message me if you have any doubts, Ellie :)0 votedJune 7, 20190
- Please correct the text "Creating presentations".My first <s>steps in</s> introduction to graphic design <s>were made</s> started with <s>by</s> creating presentations <s>in</s> on PowerPoint in 2005, then I used to work as a marketing manager. <s>And</s> For almost every presentation I've worked on, I built structures (the message here is a little unclear) and wrote texts. It is still one of my favourite task<s>s</s> types. I've always preferred a minimalistic style <s>what</s> which focuses an audience's attention on the main thoughts<s>. B </s>because I believe, the less objects we have on a slide, the more effectively our message sinks in <s>our message</s>. A presentation for a public <s>statement</s> purpose should only contain <s>only</s> key words and their visualisations, <s>what</s> which will help an audience to structure (?) and remember the speech. There is no reason to put in/ insert <s>it</s> a lot of words and pictures, it won't be read<s>ed</s> <s>neither</s> by either the speaker <s>nor</s> or by the audience. If it is a document <s>for</s> to be sent <s>sending</s> via e-mail, it <s>probably</s> will probably include more details. But anyway it mustn't be a book.Goos job Valery!! I hope these corrections help! The words highlighted in pink are corrections and the word in yellow is an alternative word that would fit nicely! Feel free to message me if you have any doubts :)0 votedJune 7, 20190
- 03 - TED<s>The</s> Last Sunday I was searching for articles about English improvement techniques and one of them suggested <s>to</s> watching the TED talks, because <s>as opposed to</s> unlike films they speak much more and the audio is very clear and so, they are perfect for someone with an intermediate level. I already knew about it thanks to Youtube, but I had never visited the TED website. Hence, I decided to subscribe to the site and to start watching some conferences. The result was incredib<s>i</s>le, I would<s>n't</s> had never thought that they were so good. There are talks about a multitude of topics and a lot of them are mind blowing. Now I suggest it to everyone <s>all </s>because it helps you not only with your English level, but above all it opens your mind and it teaches you a lot of incredible things.A very inspiring comment on TED talks Antonello with very few mistakes! I particularly enjoyed your varied use of vocabulary so well done!0 votedJune 3, 20191
Please help me correct my English: Granny Comes!
My 76-year-old mother-in-law, Shifang, is paying a visit to us. After a 12 hour's overnight sleep on the train, she finally arrived yesterday morning . The whole family, especially my two children, is are so happy to have granny in our house for the next month.
My mother-in-law is a very energetic woman given her age. Right after she set her foot inside the house, she started to take all the items out from her luggage suitcase and the two plastic bags stuffed with all kinds of food and toys. She had some local specialities including tofu products from my husband's hometown, some cake for her darling granddaughter (she loves my daughter Yimo very much as Yimo is the only girl among all the four of her grandchildren), a bag of my husband's favorite fish ball (?), a full pack of mushrooms cultivated on my brother-in-law's farm, a box of carefully wrapped cage-free organic eggs, and the bamboo leaves for cooking rice dumplings later for my son.
And guess what? After all these items were dispatched and acclaimed by the recipients, she took out a bag of small plants (chives and a special herb which my husband loves to make tea from) in a magic charm (?) and headed to the backyard to start gardening!I loved reading your text Vivian!!! A really interesting piece that made me want to read on. Corrections are in yellow and the question marks indicate that something was unclear. Keep up the good work!
0 votedApril 15, 20191Stuff You Should Know: Fan theories
Recently, before I go to bed, I have acquired the habit of listening to a podcast called Stuff You Should Know, which it was indicated suggested by a tutor of mine, before I go to bed. I loved this podcast because they talk about many interesting things and I understand almost everything.
In one of the episodes, I listened about fan theories. It was They were some theories that fans made about TV shows, cartoons, movies and etc.
There is one theory that surprises me, it's the theory about The Fresh Prince of Bel Air. The theory describes explains that the character Will Smith´s character didn't move to Bel Air, he actually died. Actually, The Bel Airs mansion is in fact the heaven. That's why we almost never see his parents, it's because his parents is are showing when they visit the Will's grave.A really great piece Juliano! Good use of tenses in most places and interesting content. My only suggestion would be to check the final sentence as the message wasn´t too clear. Take care :)
0 votedApril 15, 20192
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