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Please correct the text "Creating presentations". My first steps in graphic design were made by creating presentations in PowerPoint in 2005, then I used to work as a marketing manager. And for almost every presentation I've worked on I also built structures and wrote texts. It is still one of my favourite tasks type. I've always preferred a minimalistic style what focuses an audience's attention on the main thoughts. Because I believe, the less objects we have on a slide, the more effectively sinks in our message. A presentation for a public statement should contain only key words and their visualisations, what will help an audience to structure and remember the speech. There is no reason to put in it a lot of words and pictures, it won't be readed neither by speaker nor by the audience. If it is a document for sending via e-mail, it probably will include more details. But anyway it mustn't be a book.

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Please correct the text "Creating presentations".

My first steps in introduction to graphic design were made started with by creating presentations in on PowerPoint in 2005, then I used to work as a marketing manager. And For almost every presentation I've worked on, I built structures (the message here is a little unclear) and wrote texts. It is still one of my favourite tasks types. I've always preferred a minimalistic style what which focuses an audience's attention on the main thoughts. B because I believe, the less objects we have on a slide, the more effectively our message sinks in our message. A presentation for a public statement purpose should only contain only key words and their visualisations, what which will help an audience to structure (?) and remember the speech. There is no reason to put in/ insert it a lot of words and pictures, it won't be readed neither by either the speaker nor or by the audience. If it is a document for to be sent sending via e-mail, it probably will probably include more details. But anyway it mustn't be a book.

Goos job Valery!! I hope these corrections help! The words highlighted in pink are corrections and the word in yellow is an alternative word that would fit nicely! Feel free to message me if you have any doubts :)

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