PLEASE CORRECT ME !!!! Job Application

Hello,

My name is Andrew. I am living in ... Rockford Road (city you live in, not your street) and completing my Masters at Illinois University.

I am looking for a part-time job.
I saw your advertisement in Dice Newspaper and found you are looking for a Shopkeeper this holiday season.

I have about eight months of experience working in Walmart and worked in a local Walmart as a store assistant.
I have extensive experience working with customers, and I have a unique skill: I can speak Spanish, French and Arabic fluently. I feel that this would assist your business, as well.

One thing I love about customer interaction is it's a different experience everyday. Also, I am very impressed with the employee reviews regarding City Museum. I heard working with City Museum is one of the best experiences. 

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Lovely! I made corrections to make it sound much more professional as well as spelling, grammer, etc.

At the beginning, instead of saying you live on Rockford Road, say which city you live in.

At the end, I love "Looking forward to hearing from you."   However, I changed it from "hear" to "hearing," which is the grammatically correct way of saying the phrase! :)

Also, did you mean "store assistant" or that you "worked in store assistance?" 

If you worked in store assistance, the sentence should be, "worked in a local Walmart in store assistance."

My best wishes in getting the job!

Please comment back if anything is unclear or you have questions!

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Croissant with Nutella^__^

I made a croissant with Nutella stuffing yesterday. I was so happy when it got my family's approval.
Making a croissant requires many steps. The dough needs to rest after every step. I will post the link of the video that I followed below. I only took this photo because I was tired when I finished baking them.
 https://youtu.be/TqNbh5TdUjY

P.S. In the video, the chef used cheese as stuffing, not Nutella.