*30-day writing challenge - (4/30) My first love.
My first love was a boy who studied with me at elementary school. He was my best friend and at certain moment I started to falling in love with him. It was an innocent love. I remeber the day the tacher put him to sit by my side. I was delighted, because I'd stay next to him the whole morning. I never said to him that I was in love with him. It was my secret. I thought that if I said it to him, he wouldn't be my friend anymore. Then we grew up and and each one follow their own path. Two years ago we met at the bus stop and started to talk about the past. Then, he told me his secret: he was in love with me when we studied together..
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*30-Day Writing Challenge - (4/30) My First Love.
My first love was a boy who studied with me at in elementary school. He was my best friend, and at a certain moment, I started to falling in love with him. It was an innocent love. I remember the day the teacher put him to sit sat him by my side beside me. I was delighted because I'd I stayed next to him the whole morning. I never said to him (or "told him") that I was in love with him. It was my secret. I thought that if I said it to him ("told him") he wouldn't be my friend anymore. Then, we grew up and and each one follow their followed our own path. Two years ago, we met at the bus stop and started to talk about the past. Then, he told me his secret: he was in love with me when we studied together...1
*30-day writing challenge - (4/30) My first love.
My first love was a boy who studied with me* at in elementary school. He was my best friend and at certain moment one point I started to falling in love with him. It was an innocent love. I remember the day the teacher told put him to sit by me. I was delighted, because I'd stay next to him the whole morning. I never said to told him that I was in love with him. It was my secret. I thought that if I said it to him, he wouldn't be my friend anymore. Then we grew up and and each both of us one followed their our own path. Two years ago we met at the a bus stop and started to talk about the past. Then, he told me his secret: he was in love with me when we studied together..*You could also say, "My first love was a classmate of mine in elementary school."
Good job, Aline. Your English is clear and easy to understand. And what a lovely story! Good luck with the rest of your writing challenge.
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