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[deleted text]A Good Friend Died (a)
I had a good friend, but he died suddenly at midnight. (b) I can't believe that I just saw you and talked to you on Monday. You told me that you would (c) bring me some sweet potatoes, which are (d) good for losing weight because I am on a diet. You were (e) so thoughtful.Although you were (e) older than me, you didn't (e) treat me as a little boy. You said a bunch of funny things that you got when you were young. (Did he tell you funny jokes and stories from his youth?) Also, you gave me presents on (f) special holidays. What a wonderful man you were. (g) You passed away in your sleep. I hope you can have a better life in another world. (g)
a. Capitalize the first letter of each word in a title.
b. Use commas to separate independent clauses when they are joined by any of these seven coordinating conjunctions: and, but, for, or, nor, so, yet.
c. We use would as the past tense of will: to talk about what people wanted to do or were willing to do.
d. subject/verb agreement in number: plural
e. Verb should be past tense.
f. On is a preposition used to specify days or dates.
g. Sentence fragment, missing subject or verb.0 votedMarch 8, 20190(a) see footnote
After reading the book, I wanted to try to get up at 6:00 a.m. (b) On the first day[s] it was easy, I was full of enthusiasm. My wish was to be better than I can really be, better than other people and do more. (c) But after few weeks or may[ ]be even a few days, I couldn't wake up.(d) I got up and turned off the alarm clock and continued sleeping. I couldn't wake up. Is it possible to have more motivation to get up earlier?
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How I can get up early after reading "The Miracle Morning" (a)a. Remember to capitalize the first letter of each word in a book title.
b. A comma is recommended after any introductory prepositional phrase of more than four words. The abbreviation "a.m." stands for "ante meridian" or morning, "p.m." stands for post meridian or evening. Include one of these if your time is not 24 hour clock time.
c. This is referred to as a run-on sentence. It has ideas which could be separated or grouped better.
d. This introductory prepositional phrase should have a comma.
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0 votedMarch 7, 20191The Berlin blockage was crucial in the containment policy of the USA
Hello, can you correct me please? Thank you!
->We can say that the Berlin blockage was crucial in the containment policy of the USA because Berlin was an the example of the two models of society. In Germany, and especially , in Berlin, we could see differences between capitalism and communism. So the USA had to keep west Berlin west American in order to show the supremacy of their model over on the Soviet one. The Americans had to keep Berlin, because, if they left Berlin to the USSR, Staline would have tried try to take have the rest of Germany, and in this case, the communist presence forehead would have been at the door of western Europe.
->So, it was a very difficult hard power struggle between the USA and the USSR, but with this feat, the USA proved that they could manage a very delicate situation with calm, intelligence and diplomacy without starting a third world war.
->And finally, the USA they also showed to other countries that they are were powerful and rich, they can could defend their allies and they can could fight communism without a physical war. These ideas behind this containment policy communicated a very strong message to other nations. And this is a very strong message which is sent to other nations and that played a lot in the containment policy of the USA.0 votedMarch 3, 20191Mankind
I think that the mankind stands on the verge of forming formation its own essence.
Whether Either we will be a cancer tumor on our planet body and eventually kill it (and ourselves), or we will'll make ourselves us a beneficial part of the Earth, complimenting complementing and improving our environment, as it has happened with to a mitochondria during the process of evolution process. According to the theory of evolution, Mitochondria were, which, being a bacteria, has embodied that embedded in the cell, and due to that their common co-existence together has led to a huge leap in life development.0 votedMarch 3, 20191American movies vs French movies
American movies are very different from French movies. In American movies, there is a lot of action and special effects. I have the impression that the more action there is, the more attractive is the movie. Anyway, this is the main way American movies are shown here in France. In the stereotype: American movies are blockbusters and French movies are boring.
I think most of French filmmakers try to introduce a moral of the story or make the spectator feel difficult hard emotions like sadness, distress, or pain. These emotions need an oppressive atmosphere, that's which is why some French movies seem so long. We also have a filmmaker as Luc Besson who is able to make great films with a lot of action, for example as "Le transporteur" with Jason Statham (who is not very French). We don't have great figures like "the Rock" to play the bad guy. Some French actors are still very talented (think about Vincent Cassel or Jean Réno), but they are stuck in the same roles (just as Liam Neeson who is still always the guy who has to must save his wife/girl/boy/dog/fridge or I don't know 😅). Anyway, to come back to Luc Besson, if you have never seen "Le cinquième élément" (with Bruce Willis) you should, because it's a masterpiece !
In USA, I like the filmmaker M. Night Shyamalan especially for his last trilogy "Unbreakable," "Split" and "Glass," : which have a lot of action but with also a moral of to the story 😁 This is S surely the kind of movie I have prefer! a preference for ! If you have other movies to suggest, please advise me! , I'm interrested ! :D0 votedMarch 3, 20191Drink Bottle
I bought a new drink bottle today for my son. I found an instruction instructions inside the bottle to tell me how to clean it. How complicated could a drink bottle be?! a drink bottle could be?!
There are three parts of the lid: straw holder, valve assembly and spout. Firstly, First, remove the straw for best results. Turn underside of the lid up and pull up straw holder and valve assembly to separate from spout. Then rinse thoroughly. Insert valve assembly into spout, straw holder into valve assembly and straw into straw holder. (Can it be more complicated ?) Push straw up as far as possible to nest correctly into lid.
The most unbelievable reminder is a sentence written in black bold font Black Bold Font and all in capital: RINSE LID IMMEDIATELY AFTER EACH USE. How could I rinse my drink bottle every time after I have a sip?0 votedMarch 3, 20190Please check my text, thanks so much.
My name is Shiguo. I am from Henan Province, China. I am a university student. My English is poor. I have wanted to travel abroad many times, but I give up when I think my spoken English is not good enough. That is why I wish to learn English well. I have also wanted to go to Japan. Firstly, I admire the serious spirit of the Japanese, it is importent for us to study it. I like an ancient thinker whose name is Weiyuan. He put forward the idea of "learning from the advanced technologies in theWest in order to resist the invasion of the Western powers." I keep this thought frequently in mind. Secondly, I like to eat a wide variety of fish, especially cooked in many different ways.
My dear friends, if my English grammar is not right, please help me check my text. Thank you so much.0 votedMarch 2, 20191Please check my text
Is your pet sick and not fawning (wagging) its tail? Has (Does your pet have) physical ailments or lack of vitality?
I can help you! I am a professional energy healer who uses space channels and specializes in the treatment of animals. Based on the health problems of your pet, I will create a healing session for it. To do this I will direct the necessary flow of energy to your pet which will harmonize the subtle bodies of the animal and bring its body and mind in balance. Besides, the energy will help to relieve your pet of the pain, heal wounds faster and raise overall energy tone, which will help the body to cope more quickly with the disease. And the pet will please you again!
This is a distance healing session. You should (J)just send me a photo of your pet. With the use of visualization and connecting by photo, the cosmic energy will be sent as if it was in person. For a better effect, several sessions are required. Therefore, I suggest working with your pet for a whole week every day as a complete session. for one gig.
Cosmoenergetics is a fairly common method of treatment, which is endorsed by a part of T the Global Health Workforce Alliance. For more information about the method please visit (link?).
I love animals very much and it is a great pleasure for me to help them!
Notice: energy healing is not a panacea from everything! In some cases (i.e. broken limb), a holistic approach is required and you should refer to conventional medicine in addition to cosmic energy healing. Even so, cosmoenergetics will make the process of recovery more rapid, easy and less painful for the pet.0 votedMarch 2, 20191
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