Berlin blockage was crucial in the containment policy of the USA
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->We can say that the Berlin blockage was crucial in the containment policy of the USA because Berlin was the example of the two models of society. In Germany and especially , in Berlin we could see differences between capitalism and communism, so the USA had to keep Berlin west American in order to show the supremacy of their model on the soviet one. The Americans had to keep Berlin because, if they left Berlin to the USSR, Staline would try to have the rest of Germany and in this case, the communist forehead would have been at the door of western Europe.
->So, it was a very hard power struggle between the USA and the USSR but with this, the USA had proved that they could manage with calm, intelligence and diplomacy a very delicate situation without starting a third world war.
->And finally, they show to other countries that they are powerful and rich, they can defend their allies and they can fight communism without a physical war. And this is a very strong message which is sent to other nations and that played a lot in the containment policy of the USA.
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Berlin blockage was crucial in the containment policy of the USA
Hello, can you correct me please? Thank you!->We can say that the response to the Berlin [blockage]/blockade* was crucial [in]/to the containment policy of the USA, because Berlin was [the example]/a demonstration of/a showcase of the two models of society. In Germany, and especially , in Berlin, we could see [differences]/the contrast between capitalism and communism, so the USA had to keep Berlin [west American]/under western control in order to show the supremacy of their model [on]/over the Soviet one. The Americans had to keep Berlin because, if they left Berlin to the USSR, Staline would [try]/have tried to have the rest of Germany and, in this case, the communist [forehead]/front line would have been at the door of western Europe.
->So, it was a [very hard] power struggle between the USA and the USSR but [with this,] the USA [had] proved that they could manage [with]/calmly, with intelligence and diplomacy, a very delicate situation, without starting a third world war.
->And finally, they showed [to] other countries that they are powerful and rich, that they can defend their allies and they can fight communism without [a physical war]/a pitched battle. And this is a very strong message which [is]/was sent to other nations, and that played a [lot]/major role in the containment policy of the USA.
* The Soviets mounted the blockade, and the western powers defied it by maintaining air corridors to ensure supplies to the beleaguered city.
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The Berlin blockage was crucial in the containment policy of the USA
Hello, can you correct me please? Thank you!->We can say that the Berlin blockage was crucial in the containment policy of the USA because Berlin was an the example of the two models of society. In Germany, and especially , in Berlin, we could see differences between capitalism and communism. So the USA had to keep west Berlin west American in order to show the supremacy of their model over on the Soviet one. The Americans had to keep Berlin, because, if they left Berlin to the USSR, Staline would have tried try to take have the rest of Germany, and in this case, the communist presence forehead would have been at the door of western Europe.
->So, it was a very difficult hard power struggle between the USA and the USSR, but with this feat, the USA proved that they could manage a very delicate situation with calm, intelligence and diplomacy without starting a third world war.
->And finally, the USA they also showed to other countries that they are were powerful and rich, they can could defend their allies and they can could fight communism without a physical war. These ideas behind this containment policy communicated a very strong message to other nations. And this is a very strong message which is sent to other nations and that played a lot in the containment policy of the USA.
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