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My name is Shiguo. I am from Henan Province,China. I am a university student. My English is poor. I want to travel aboard many times ,but I give up when I thought about my spoken English is not good . That is why I have to learn English well. I want to go to Japan all the time. Firstly,I admire the serious spirit of the Japanese, it is importent for us to study it. I like an ancient thinker whose name is Weiyuan. He put forward the idea of "learning from the advanced technologis in theWest in order to resist the invasion of the Western powers." I remeber it all the time . Secondly, I like to eat fishes where have many different kinds of fish. And there are many diifferent ways to eat.
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Please check my text , thanks so much
My name is Shiguo. I am from Henan Province, China. I am a university student. My English is poor. Many times I have wanted to travel abroard [many times] ,but I gave up when I thought about my spoken English - that it is not good . That is why I have to learn English well. I have always wanted to go to Japan [all the time]. Firstly, I admire the serious spirit of the Japanese, it is important for us to study it. I like an ancient thinker, whose name is Weiyuan. He put forward the idea of "learning from the advanced technologies in/of theWest in order to resist the invasion of the Western powers." I remember it/this all the time . Secondly, I like to eat fishes , and in Japan [where] they have/there are many different kinds of fish. And there are many diifferent ways to eat.Hi, my dear friends, if my English grammer is not right, please help me check my text. Thank you so much.
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Please check my text, thanks so much.
My name is Shiguo. I am from Henan Province, China. I am a university student. My English is poor. I have wanted to travel abroad many times, but I give up when I think my spoken English is not good enough. That is why I wish to learn English well. I have also wanted to go to Japan. Firstly, I admire the serious spirit of the Japanese, it is importent for us to study it. I like an ancient thinker whose name is Weiyuan. He put forward the idea of "learning from the advanced technologies in theWest in order to resist the invasion of the Western powers." I keep this thought frequently in mind. Secondly, I like to eat a wide variety of fish, especially cooked in many different ways.My dear friends, if my English grammar is not right, please help me check my text. Thank you so much.
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