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    我回来英国

    我回英国了

    我叫亚当,但我的学生和中国的朋友叫我‘鸭蛋’。

    我叫亚当,可我的学生和中国的朋友叫我‘鸭蛋’。

    *your students are little bit naughty^_^, but we like to call  foreigner's name in our  way to pronunciation, its just between close friends.

    我是英格兰的人。我的家在伦敦附近。

    我是英格兰人,家在伦敦附近。

    *我的repeated.

    我在大学里学音乐,然后学习教学。

    我在大学里学音乐专业,然后学习如何教学。

    *after studied music, you continiue to study education(major:教育学)or how to educate(如何教学)?

    2年来我是浙江宁波的一名英语教师。

    我在浙江宁波做了两年的英语教师。

    *natural word-order

    我很喜欢中国和中国人。我也喜欢中国菜。

    我很喜欢中国和中国人,也喜欢中国菜。

    现在我回国了。我想在网上教英语。我不想忘记我的一点点中文。

    现在我回国了。我想在网上教英语,也不想忘记我那只会一点点的中文。

    *我repeated

    *只会一点点的中文

    谢谢阅读。

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    October 16, 2018
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  • Corrected

    每日句子练习 十一(2018年10月15日)

    For the past eight years, I've continuously taught, first in America and then China.

    八年来,先在美国然后在中国,我一直教。

    过去八年里,我一直在教书,起先在美国然后在中国。

    *past eight years=过去八年

    *taught=教书,“教”is a verb,teach sth,so in chinese we need to add a noun to make the sentence complete,“教书”is the meaning for teacher's work. In the past of China, there is specific word “教书先生”means teacher.


    For some reason, I can speak better and better with you.

    因为一些原因,我跟你能讲越来越好。

    不知为什么,我能和你讲的越来越好了。

    *for some reason≠因为一些原因,it means that you don't know for what reason,is that right?so we translate it into“不知为什么/不知道是什么原因”,unconsciously,……


    My American friend betrayed me.

    我被我美国的朋友背叛了。

    我美国的朋友背叛了我。

    *good!you used passive voice to translate this sentence=“I was betrayed by my American friend”



    I've encountered the same situation.

    我遇到的情况一样。

    我遇到了一样的情况。

    *I've encounterd=我遇到了,The Present Perfect Tense


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    October 15, 2018
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    Before:

    今天起床的时候,我看到时钟,唉呀我发现了是太晚了,马上起床了去做早餐,所以然后我可以去上班,但在做早餐的时候,突然我注意到今天是星期天,所以没有工作,哈哈哈哈,于是停止了煮早餐,回去睡觉了。哈哈,我不知道为什么我想今天是星期一,猜我有点愚蠢,至少回去床非常舒服。吃完晚餐之后,我的背有点痛,想因为我的姿势很不好,所以我尝试保持好得姿势。我们刚才看着关于吃食物的影片,看好玩,可是这些的影片总是让我变饿了,所以看完之后,我去厨房吃零食!

    After:

    今天起床的时候,我看了一眼时钟,唉呀!发现起太晚了。于是马上起床去做早餐,准备去上班。可在做早餐的时候,我突然注意到今天是星期天,不用去上班啦,哈哈哈哈。所以我停止了做早餐,立马回去睡回笼觉了。哈哈,不知道为什么我会忘记了今天是星期天,真是好蠢啊lol!但至少今天不上班在床上躺着挺舒服的。

    *看了一眼/瞥了一眼,take a glance at clock, this is a short action.  看到=look or find sth

    *唉呀!发现起太晚=oh! I found Its too late

    *于是:conjunction word=then

    *准备去上班:after finished breakfast,you need to go to work

    *transitional words: 可< 但(stronger)

    *不用去上班啦:oral chinese,becouse today is an offday ,so you were feeling happy

    *回笼觉:Idiomatic Expression=unprotected sleep

    *真是好蠢啊:self-mockery,the speech of original sentence is little bit formal

    晚上吃过晚餐后,我发现背部有点痛。我想可能是我睡觉的姿势不对造成的,所以以后要注意,要保持正确的睡觉姿势。

    *注意因果关系

    ps.so were you stay in bed till the dinner that day?

    刚才我看了一部关于食物的影片,很好看!可看这样的片子总会让我变得很饿,因此看完后我又去厨房找了些零食来吃。

    *我们means your and your family or your girlfriend?when you use pronoun 我们 at first time in the composition,you need to tell us you and who were with you~

    *食物:是关于是介绍美食(introduce)还是制作美食(how to made)还是都有(both)

    comment:good job!your perseverance in  learning chinese impressed me a lot. keep it ^_^!

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    October 15, 2018
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    每日句子练习 十一(2018年10月14日)

    The languages you can speak don't depend on your blood! They depend on whether or not you study hard!

    你会讲的言语不取决于你的血!他们取决于你是否好好学习!

    你会说的语言并非是与生俱来的!而是取决于你是否用功去学习它们!

    *your blood=你的血, it means that your really bleeding blood. but in the context of this sentence, we don't translate by this way, “your blood” means that you born to know this languge=与生俱来

    *depend on=取决于,but more important thing is that what's the meaning of this sentence pattern, we usually tend to translate it into:not……but……=不是……而是……

    *study hard=好好/努力/用功学习, the emphasis is placed on “hard”.

    *In Chinese,he=他(person), she=她(person), it=它(animal or a thing(abstract or not alive))

    You know, in English history there is a very famous king named "Arthur".

    你知道,在英国的历史里有非常有名的王叫 ”Arthur".

    如你所知,在英国历史中有位非常有名的国王——名叫“亚瑟”。

    *in Chinese, we don't use “you know……” that much, I think its just culture difference in this two different language, so when we translate "you know" in chinese, we always say “如你所知”/“你知道的”/“你知道吗”something like that.


    *“王”is not complete word in oral Chinese,we use “国王”.

    *"Arthur" in Chinese word is "亚瑟”.


    Besides rice vermicelli noodles, do you have any other kinds of noodles?

    在粉丝之外,你有其他种的面条?

    除了米粉以外,你还有其他种类的面条吗?

    *rice vermicelli noodles=米粉/米线, the noodles is pretty thin which made of rice flour. Yummy!

    *other kinds=其他种类, “种” is not complete word.

    Bring it here.

    你把他带过来。

    把它带来。

    *you know where the error is~

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    October 14, 2018
    2