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    Informal presentation

    - I have to write an informal presentation about myself, i'm learning english so I'm really happy if tou could correct my error and offer suggestion. Thank you!! -

    Hello, I'm an Italian girl looking for her place in the world.
    I love to travelling, I love animals, and I love yoga. I have practiced it Yoga from for about one year.
    I have recently come back in to Italy after 4 month of van-life (??you travelled around and live in a van as I understand) in Spain and Portugal.
    My goal now is to improve my English, to live and know the different cultures, to do gain new experience, to meet people from around the world and to know for myself.(to “discover myself”or to “have more knowledge for myself” or “for myself”, depends on what you want to say)
    I adapt easy at the situation ( I adapt the situation easily), and I'm friendly, and yes- a person without the scary about to live (who isn’t scared of living) out of the box.
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    October 1, 2018
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    exhibition

    I was with my friends on the japanise culture exhibition in the Pushkin Museum in Moscow. We had been planning to visit this event for two months and at last we could do it. I bought all tickets online so that we have no problems with a long queue in front of the museum. The exhibition itself was really great: there are many various paintings which I'd never seen before. Especially I liked Hokusai's paintings.


    Grammatically, without interfering the context of the past/present tense; it should change a bit like this:

    The exhibition

    I was with my friends in the Japanese culture exhibition in the Pushkin Museum in Moscow. We had been planning to visit this event for two months and at last we could do it. I bought all the tickets online so that we have no problems with a long queue in front of the museum. The exhibition itself was really great: there are many various paintings which I've never seen before. Especially I liked Hokusai's paintings.


    I would personally write it as follow, using the past tense to retell the story

     The exhibition

    I was with my friends in the Pushkin Museum in Moscow, for the Japanese culture exhibition. We had planned this visit for two months, and finally we could make it. I have bought all the tickets online so we didn’t have any problem with a long queue in front of the museum. The exhibition itself was really great: there were many different paintings which I've never seen before. I especially like the paintings of Hokusai


    (just my humble opinion, English is not my native language. I only use them most of the time for the past 10 years)

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    October 1, 2018
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  • Corrected

    does this sentence sound naturally?

    you should have your own way without following other people 's words.


    It depends on the context, but I imagine your sentence should work if you are trying to tell someone to do something him/herself 

    Here are some other options:

    - You should have your own way to work without following the others’

    - You should have your own way without listening to the others

    Or, in the case of raising one’s voice:

    - You should have your own opinion without following the others’ 


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