exhibition I was with my friends on the japanise culture exhibition in the Pushkin Museum in Moscow. We had been planning to visit this event for two months and at last we could do it. I bought all ti

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exhibition I was with my friends on the japanise culture exhibition in the Pushkin Museum in Moscow. We had been planning to visit this event for two months and at last we could do it. I bought all tickets online so that we have no problems with a long queue in front of the museum. The exhibition itself was really great: there are many various paintings which I'd never seen before. Especially I liked Hokusai's paintings.

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Exhibition

I was with my friends on the at a japanise Japanese culture exhibition in the Pushkin Museum in Moscow. We had been planning to visit this event for two months, and at last we could do did it (... at last we did so). I bought all our/the tickets online so that we didn't have no problems with to worry about a long queue in front of the museum. The exhibition itself was really great:; there are were many various paintings which I'd never seen before. I especially/particularly I liked Hokusai's paintings.

exhibition

I was with my friends at on the japanese japanise culture exhibition at the Pushkin Museum in Moscow. We had been planning to visit this event for two months and at last we made could do it. I bought all tickets online so that we wouldn't have no any queuing problems with a long queue at the entrance of the museum. The exhibition itself was fascinating really great: there is a great variety are many various of paintings which I'd never seen before. Especially I particularly liked Hokusai's paintings.

exhibition

I was with my friends on the japanise culture exhibition in the Pushkin Museum in Moscow. We had been planning to visit this event for two months and at last we could do it. I bought all tickets online so that we have no problems with a long queue in front of the museum. The exhibition itself was really great: there are many various paintings which I'd never seen before. Especially I liked Hokusai's paintings.

Grammatically, without interfering the context of the past/present tense; it should change a bit like this:

The exhibition

I was with my friends in the Japanese culture exhibition in the Pushkin Museum in Moscow. We had been planning to visit this event for two months and at last we could do it. I bought all the tickets online so that we have no problems with a long queue in front of the museum. The exhibition itself was really great: there are many various paintings which I've never seen before. Especially I liked Hokusai's paintings.

I would personally write it as follow, using the past tense to retell the story

The exhibition

I was with my friends in the Pushkin Museum in Moscow, for the Japanese culture exhibition. We had planned this visit for two months, and finally we could make it. I have bought all the tickets online so we didn’t have any problem with a long queue in front of the museum. The exhibition itself was really great: there were many different paintings which I've never seen before. I especially like the paintings of Hokusai

(just my humble opinion, English is not my native language. I only use them most of the time for the past 10 years)

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