IELTS task 1 writing
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The given illustration depict
s information about the process of manufacturing bricks for the building industry.
All in all, t [Style] The process consist
s of various steps [several stages - sounds more natural].
In the beginning, the earth is excavated by a digger
machine in order to extract clay [for style: 'a digger is used to excavate earth, from which clay is extracted':better to avoid passive voice ('earth is excavated') ]. The
next step is the fine clay
, which is prepared by passing through the metal grid. [New sentence]
It is then mixed with sand and water in order to create the
aggregate mixture. Next, the bricks are formed by pouring the aggregate into the mo
uld or by a wire cutter machine. In the following step, the bricks are kept in
to an oven for
few several days under specific conditions.
circumstances. First,
they lose the moisture in the bricks evaporates in the oven for one or two days. Then
the bricks are heated in a few steps. The heating starts at a temperature of
with 200 degrees
of Celsius and continues up to 1300 degrees. Finally, the bricks are cooled down in the chamber for two or three days and
, in the end, they are ready for packing and delivering to the industry
ies.